Wednesday, 25 October 2023

The Keeper Of Traken: Ranking - 29

 

The Keeper Of Traken

(Season 18, Dr 4 with Adric and Nyssa, 31/1/1981-21/2/1981, producer: John Nathan-Turner, script editor: Christopher H Bidmead, writer: Johnny Byrne, director: John Black)

Rank: 29

   'Right everyone, never fear, I'm here to eradicate all evil. Wait you're not the Keeper of Traken! Why did you bring me here?' 

'Well, you're not the Dr I was expecting either' 

'What do you mean?' 

'I'm the wicket-keeper of Traken - I invited the 5th Dr for a game or cricket!'






There’s a particular kind of melancholy that hangs around Tom Baker’s final trilogy of episodes that’s unlike anything else the show ever tried. We’re so used to seeing the 4th Doctor as the universe’s errant youthful joker that it’s quite a change seeing him stay quiet and still, old before his time on a trio of very downbeat stories. All three parts are very different to each other though and they’re all so good they’re all in my top thirty. In this middle story of the three he’s on the rebound after losing Romana at the end of ‘Warrior’s Gate’, not even bothering to make a K9 mark IV when she leaves either as if he knows that it’s time to come of age and put away childish things like robotic dogs. That last story found The Doctor struggling to adapt to a world that was moving in its own sweet time regardless of anything he did and where he had to be brave to say goodbye to his friends. By next story ‘Logopolis’ he’s reduced to watching his arch-enemy permanently wipe out half of the universe in Dr Who’s biggest (thankfully off-screen) bloodbath and losing his own life alongside it. By comparison ‘Keeper Of Traken’ is almost jolly, but only almost. After all, it’s a story that tries hard to find the good in all things but comes to the conclusion that evil will always survive even amongst good people, with a rare conclusion that sees the Doctor loses, wiping out his actions during this story and quite a few others. The 4th Doctor once seemed invincible, unstoppable, unbeatable, but now he feels as if he’s living on borrowed time, his quips coming from a dark and dangerous place, his flippancy a cover-up for his approaching sense of mortality, his dashing heroics not enough to stem the tide of entropy that is engulfing the whole world and turning it the wrong way. If most 4th Doctor stories are a party in space, as he takes out the bad guys with a wave of his scarf and an offer of jelly babies, then this is a wake.



Watching ‘The Keeper Of Traken’ is quite the trip in 2023, so imagine how it must have felt in 1981, against a backdrop of planet Earth swinging to the right and moving away from peace to war. This isn’t a time for jokes and jelly babies, this is a new decade that’s working to new rules, as if humanity has taken away the stabilisers and the steering hand that had kept it out of harm’s way and the feeling that, just maybe, if the rest of the 1980s carried on the same way as its first year, then it might be humanity’s last. There’s a general air of hopelessness and despair to the news bulletins around the broadcast of ‘Keeper Of Traken’, as Ronald Reagan comes to power in America on a wave of anti-Russian rhetoric and Margaret Thatcher prepares Britain for its first war in nearly forty years, a feeling that the hippie hope of the 1960s and the colourful glam denial of the 1970s have only delayed the inevitable state of decay. Where does that leave a series that so neatly reflected the 1960s sense of optimism and peace? It leaves it here, in a story about the Eden-world of Traken, where the hippies won, where evil just calcified and shrivels up and dies on contact with the planet surface (no, I don’t know how that works scientifically either, but it’s a fairytale so you run with it!) and where the planet has been kept safe for hundreds of years by a ‘Keeper’ and their mysterious source of power, which feels like a metaphor for all those 1960s values the series once stood for and where it started (as well as being a bit postmodernist: the ending sees a ‘source manipulator’ plugged into the ‘source of knowledge’, a good barebones summary of what’s going on with the plot). Just look at the way the Melkur, the symbol of evil that arrived from another planet and turned into stone is stopped by kindness and the flowers the people hang round it’s neck: flower power values saving the world. Even the name ‘Melkur’ translates as ‘a fly trapped by honey’, killed by something sweet. Only now the Keeper is dying, the empire is crumbling and even though the Doctor can put things right for a single story it’s all undone with an ending that spells the end for the planet, the empire and in the future very nearly the Doctor himself. Despite the odd setting, despite the fact that right u to the present day this is the very final Dr Who stories to feature no Human characters whatsoever (Adric is Alzarian, remember), it all feels very familiar, very Human, as if this the latest re-telling of an age old tale that goes back to our beginnings, a tale of good and evil.  And if Traken, the one world in Dr Who’s that’s genuinely full of good and kind and lovely people, can’t keep evil at bay then what chance have we?



The 4th Doctor, who once belonged everywhere, doesn’t feel as if he belongs in this story. He belongs to a different era, with quick-fix solutions to knotty problems, and the world is in too much of a state to be put right quite as easily and nothing is easy in this story, where pure good is no longer a match for pure evil. That’s not to say that Tom Baker is wrong – far from it; the actor may have been brilliant as the smart alecky alien (and I’m even more in awe of his attempts to go ‘evil’ in stories like ‘Invasion Of Time’) but he’s a far better actor than he was ever given credit for by the world at large away from Dr Who. His work in these final days, when he walks around like a timelord with the weight of the world on his shoulders, shutting down even when talking to his companions (none of whom he knows very well as yet) is sublime, going totally against seven years of what we’ve come to expect. This final trilogy might well be his best work in the role in fact. To be fair maybe some of it wasn’t acting: by all accounts Tom met his match with new producer John Nathan-Turner who, desperate to make his mark on the series, was happier to shout down his leading man than either of his two predecessors, the clean sweep with the broom happy to call Tom’s  bluff that he would leave if he didn’t get his own way. The actor too was suffering from an undiagnosed complaint that made him feel rough and grumpy (some fans have wondered if it was psychosomatic but something in his metabolism changed – his famously long curly hair went limp and straight so that what you see on screen is the result of hours in makeup he’d never had to have before). Losing co-star Lalla Ward, with whom he’d had so much fun (well, some of the time) also came as quite a blow – as much as they continued their relationship away from the series, even getting married in December 1980 right in the middle between the recording and transmission of this story, it was rarely as happy for them in the real world as it had been inside a TV studio with characters to hide behind.



I’m not sure whether incoming script editor Christopher H Bidmead sensed these melancholy changes in the world or in the rehearsal rooms or would have made them anyway but, after sticking all the previously commissioned stories of season 18 that had been partly started under predecessor Douglas Adams at the start of the season, here at the end of the year he finally gets to shape Dr Who the way he wants – and it’s a much darker, sombre, better series for it. Most fans add ‘scientific’ to that list given that Bidmead’s background was in computers and his promise to make Dr Who more ‘realistic’ in the wake of harder-edged scifi films like ‘Alien’ and ‘Close Encounters Of The Third Kind’ that were doing so well at the box office at the time but honestly, other than the mathematics at the heart of his own story ‘Logopolis’, that isn’t necessarily true: Bidmead’s take on the Whoniverse in the stories he commissioned himself are even more fairytale-like than Steven Moffat’s to come, full of planets that don’t strictly exist (‘Castrovalva’) are filled with giant alien frogs archiving humans from across time (seriously – ‘Four To Doomsday’) and giant pink Buddhist snakes (‘Kinda’) not to mention Dr Who’s most surreal story ‘Warrior’s Gate’. After half a year of big bold bright colours and bright spotlights the end of this season and the start of the next is all about pastel hues, out of focus lenses and blurred edges. The stories too are gentler and softer even though the stakes are higher, more abstract stories about the concepts of good and evil that don’t use guns and weapons and sword fights so much as imagery and metaphors. And no story is more fairytale-like than ‘Keeper Of Traken’, which feels like a Brothers Grimm style folk tale, where a people who live in paradise on a planet powered by a mystical unseen source of energy give in to their darker side. This is a world that has been without evil for so long that people have forgotten to be afraid of it and think they can always beat it, but they can’t: good and evil have always existed side by side and always will exist in balance, because you can’t have one without the other, and after periods of light there are also periods of dark. Note the way that the ‘goody’ and ‘baddy’ swap positions by the end of this story, where the shrivelled up old man and shrivelled up decaying Master in parallel, only The Keeper starts with all the power and The Master tries to end with it (the true balance is in the middle, when The Doctor intervenes, a character whose neither all good or all bad).



Bidmead’s starting point for this story was an unusual one for a Dr Who story forget your science weeklies, your scifi pulp magazines and your children’s comics, it was an article on the Christian concept of millennialism, the belief that civilisations always went in cycles. Mankind would always get it together for a short length of time, just long enough to believe that a time of longterm peace and prosperity was possible, but that longterm any one thing was unsustainable. Peace and stability were fragile and something would always come along and puncture it when we had become too complacent and were looking the other way, whether a natural disaster we couldn’t control or from our own hand (after all, it’s harder to be scared of a war when you’ve never lived through one than when you’ve survived one and vowed never to risk another). Though technology might change and the rulers who sit in the big throne might regenerate and change their appearance mankind never changes and each successive generation are liable to make the same mistakes as their forebears. There has to come a point, after all, when we stop evolving and start devolving – there must be a limit humanity can reach somewhere, some shelf life when the civilisation we’ve built for ourselves can’t maintain itself any more and crumbles. And what better a time for that to happen than a year of great change, with a big fat ‘zero’ at the end of it, or maybe a few? Specifically ‘Millennialism’ is the fear of the end of a millennium and the start of a new one, something that’s in all sorts of ancient texts (including the Bible) and in 1981 times was getting pretty close to the year 2000; so many changes had already taken place with the start of a new decade, what on earth would the start of a new thousand year cycle bring?  Of course to those of us sitting here in the 21st century the idea of the year 2000 being at all scary is patently complete and utter nonsense (the impending doom and imminent collapse didn’t start until at least, ooh, 2001) but it was a real fear that a lot of people shared. To quote Kassia, ‘nothing is normal at such a time’.  It’s a very Dr Whoy theme, then, this question of balance, of how you can’t have good without evil or hope without despair, happiness without sadness or victory without failure. And after seven years of running around putting things right effortlessly even the 4th Doctor must fall.



Goodness knows what Johnny Byrne made of that commission. A friend of both Bidmead’s and producer John-Nathan Turner’s, he’d been script editor on the series ‘All Creatures Great and Small’ with Peter Davison (it’s where JNT had met them both) and had been the producer’s first choice for script editor on Who before he turned it down (having recently had children, he hated the idea of uprooting his family to come and work in London near TV centre): as a Dr Who fan himself, however, he was flattered and offered to write them a story sometime (it always seemed odd to me that, having written for Peter Davison’s character Tristan so well they didn’t keep him back for one of the 5th Doctor’s first scripts). Byrne read a newspaper story about a country in Latin America that had just lost their longterm leader and the chaos the correspondent feared might happen without such stability (it could have been Pinochet in Chile, who’d just resigned – for the first time as it turns out – in 1981, or Videla, the president of Argentina who resigned the same year, though both seem to be cutting it a bit close to transmission time) and tried to bring that atmosphere into his script, though of course being Dr Who it was a ruler who had been in power for centuries and whole generations not merely years.



Given that idea of good versus evil and a panic over the future you’d have expected Byrne to go down the route of snakes interrupting the garden paradise, especially given that the Mara are waiting in the wings four stories later, but instead he creates The Melkur, a stone statue that’s ‘alive’ and welcomed into the garden by the kind noble people of Traken. Everyone there knows the Melkur represents evil, but legend has it that Traken was just too kind and pure a planet so evil just shrivelled up and died when it arrived there, the Melkur ending up a calcified statue unable to move. It’s become a monument down the centuries, a reminder of darker times, and the locals still employ a girl every generation to look after the statue and feed it, to make it welcome and feel a part of the planet. If this was a Dr Who story in any other era that would be karma enough for everyone to stay happy and safe: you can magine one of the black-and-white comic strips having the 1st or 2nd Doctors turn up, talk about how marvellous it all is, exterminate the Trods hanging around outside and go home. You think for one glorious episode as if there’s not going to be any peril at all in this story and that the ‘Keeper’ who called on the Doctor for help with a distress call has simply got things wrong– if anyone’s an antagonist in the early part of this story it’s the Doctor, arriving in the Tardis and swishing his scarf around noisily, ruffling feathers amongst the Traken nobles as much out of boredom as anything else (or perhaps to have a break from Adric asking him endless questions over and over again). It’s fun to see the Dr greeted with the sort of resigned diplomacy reserved for Great Aunts and rogue politicians rather than as an all-conquering hero as a change and its almost a shame when the Melkur starts to wake up and The Keeper’s sixth senses of a ‘lurking evil’ prove to be true. And even then it’s a subtle evil: I mean, the baddy is literally rooted to the ground, he’s not going to cause any real trouble is he? But evil has funny way of getting inside people without them really noticing, slipping through the cracks of the people in Traken who haven’t known evil for so long they’ve forgotten what it looks and feels like.  Forget your mass alien invasions, this story is subtle in the extreme, with a nagging sense of something slightly wrong rather than a horrific tragedy, and in a season that started with mafia lizards playing tennis and talking lifesize cactuses is all the better for it. Of all the planets that exist in the Whoniverse Traken is in my top places to move to (err, give or take – spoilers – the fact that it’s destroyed in the very next story!), a place where everyone is kind and helpful and benevolent, without losing any time or resources playing silly soldiers, so that it’s had time to create multiple wonders of its own (I love the way that despite this being such a spiritual planet, Traken is no slouch when it comes to technology and has things that even impresses the Doctor). Which also means that it’s a place totally unprepared for anyone who wants to do them harm. It reminds me of my days happily playing the computer game ‘Age Of Empires’ and building Ancient Greece into a bastion of knowledge and learning. Only for my friends playing as Ancient Romans and Vikings and the like to come along and smash everything up (*sob*!) If ‘Traken’ is a story about anything then it’s a story about balance, about how societies have to be a bit of everything to survive otherwise people will take advantage of you, which is a hard lesson to learn but is sadly true.    



The hippie philosophy also makes this a story that,  more than any other in the 1970s and 1980s I can think of, seems like Dr Who’s roots in the 1960s, where it started. Many fans have commented that ‘The Keeper Of Traken’ is ‘like a Hartnell’, which might explain why I love it so much (the 1st Dr’s being my own particular favourite era, with a greater sense of magic and wonder and endless possibilities than any of the others and a large dollop of 1960s spirit and optimism) but for most reviewers that’s shorthand for ‘slow’ and they leave it at that. ‘Keeper’ is decidedly slow, full of characters either so old or so at peace they don’t move very much and do a lot of talking at each other, without the usual running up and down corridors, but that’s a good thing when the dialogue is this good and involving: just take a look at the ‘Internet Movie Database’ site for this story where there are more quotes taken from these four episodes than pretty much any other Dr Who story. An even bigger reason this feels like a Hartnell story is that we have time to explore this world, that Traken isn’t a planet that only exists for the purposes of the plot and has no life beyond it – there are a lot of scenes giving us things that, strictly speaking, we don’t need to know to follow the story but which really help give us the feeling of a world full of customs and traditions that existed long before the Tardis arrives. It feels ‘real’, a planet that beats to its own eternal logic that’s almost but not quite like ours, full of small subtle detais that really sell this world and (rarer than you might think) proves that writers, script editor and director were all on the same page: the same lush ‘fairy dresses’ in un-crumpled velvet as if the Trakenites have nothing better to do all day than iron; the fact that every female on this planet genetically has curly hair (even Nyssa, which is a problem when she becomes a companion later and Sarah Sutton has to spend hours getting her naturally straight hair made up every time) and the men all have straight hair, the way everyone keeps their voices quiet and respectful, even in anger (such a contrast to all the usual shouting!)



Another is that ‘Traken’ is very much of its time, the way the 1960s episodes often were – for the most part 1970s Dr Who has been about escapism, the Doctor’s exile to Earth replacing the sense of exploring current affair in metaphors in space and while we’re about to get lots of cold war parables when the 1980s hits its stride this is kind of a halfway house, one that looks as if the camera is about to cut away to ‘Spandau Ballet’ or ‘A Flock Of Seagulls’ performing in front of the Trakenite extras in their velvet ruffs.. Most of the landscape has the same sort of lushness as contemporary TV (we’re still a little early yet for the ‘Beauty and the Beast’ series but it looks just like that, with just a hint of ‘Knight Rider’) and people who live on Traken have that same sense theatrical dress sense and gothic makeup, seeming like they write poetry about death in their bedrooms at weekends after a week’s heavy pouting, even though they’re quite happy people most of the time. Like all good new romantic somethings though there’s just a hint of the punk rock Melkur that came before them that everyone’s reacting to (an era entirely absent aesthetically from DW, the closest being the back-to-basics everybody-dies horror of ‘Fang Rock’ – and that’s a story about an alien green blob killing people in an Edwardian lighthouse so it’ s not exactly a perfect fit; the drug-dealing ‘Nightmare Of Eden’ is another candidate but if anything that’s an anti-punk story about the dangers to your Mandrils if you keep stuffing things up your nose). This is a planet of people who’ve seen their elder siblings get their hands dirty in the muck and grime and slime of the universe’s underbelly and decided that they’d rather live above it all, pretending to be nice to each other (even to visiting aliens: honestly most other planets would have kicked the Doctor out given all the problems that follow after he arrives). That’s the key word though, ‘pretending’ – Traken lives in fear that one day evil will come back and rather than be above it all really everyone in this planet has got their fingers in their ears going ‘la la la I can’t hear you’ and talking about how merrily happy everyone is all the time in the hope that if everyone says it enough they’ll believe it. I can’t decide whether this is a genuine catty comment from a Dr Who production team laughing at their core youthful audience of the day for lapping all this up in the early days of Thatcher and strikes and poverty (the way ‘The Abominable Snowmen’ in 1967 laughs at hippies for trusting disembodied voices promising them ‘answers’ and ‘The Dominators’ dooms them all because pacifism is stupid) or whether it’s simply Dr Who doing its old tried and tested template of showing that it’s impossible to have good without bad, that as long as humans (and even their Traken near-cousins) are around we can never have true paradise (or pure dystopia) because there is good and evil in all of us and so therefore in our societies too. Sometimes ‘Traken’ feels existential despair on the writer’s part that we can’t have nice things because life doesn’t work that way – and sometimes it feels like a warning not to look the other way and ignore the danger signals like we once did because bad times will happen again if we’re not careful. It might be significant, too, that the Melkur is designed (and indeed described in the script) as being rococo, from the ‘roaring twenties’ when the world partied away the years between the two world wars trying to pretend that everything was alright again, ignoring Hitler’s rise to power and the great depression (they would have been, roughly, the grandparents of the children watching this the first time round). Designer Tony Burroughs picked up on this with his sets, too, modelling them on the work of the Spanish architect Gaudi whose work was most famous in that decade (think Barcelona’s Cathedral), wanting the feel of a planet that had been hewn out of rock and had been there for centuries (they look magnificent: Burroughs is, deservedly, the only Dr Who set designer to go on to win an Oscar, for the 1997 film ‘Richard III’). Dr Who is briefly back to its origins as a multi-generation family series then, for a whole new generation – if only they’d kept this up into the 1980s and beyond!



I have another possible theory too, which links in to that 1920s feel: ‘Traken’ was produced at the height of the cold war when tensions were growing again and while Dr Who was forever switching sides whether capitalism or communism was better this is a story that feels firmly on the latter’s side. Only what we had in Russia by 1980s was not communist in its purest sense, but a dictatorship takeover. We never fully got to see what ‘pure’ communism in the Lenin sense might have looked like, a world where everything was roughly equal and where everyone had their roles picked for them due to their abilities (nobody on Traken so much as mentions money and everyone is only too happy to fulfil their responsibilities and do what they’re told because the state knows best and is working to a ‘higher’ power’: indeed, the first sign for the elders that Kassia might be ‘evil’ is when she looks upset at Nyssa getting her job tending graves and calcified statues). Leninist Russia following the October Revolution wasn’t paradise but it was getting there: compared to the years under the corrupt Royal family, when the rich were well fed and everyone else suffered it was a far kinder, friendly place to live. Only Lenin died in 1924 when communism was still fragile at best, without a natural heir: he’s surely the Keeper, the interpreter of this great bountiful knowledge with a vision no one else shares as fully. Trotsky seemed the obvious candidate to take over, the mild-mannered protégé, ut he couldn’t command the crowds with the same charisma: in this story he’s Tremas, felled not with a pickaxe to the head exactly but a blow from inside a grandfather clock (don’t ask!) The Melkur? That’s Stalin, a being that barely moves a muscle and tries to pass himself of as a friendly Uncle, whose secretly plotting to take all the best things for himself even more than the Royals did, ‘communism’ equality by name but no longer by nature. Only Stalin was clever enough not to rule in a giant coup or by necessarily denouncing his rivals but in quietly moving into power, bit by bit, until he was in a position where his own people began to think of him as the good guy. ‘The Keeper Of Traken’ is George Orwell’s ‘Animal Farm’, then, only with  aliens in fancy dress and statues rather than talking horses and pigs (‘Two Calcified Legs Bad…’) Given The Master’s links to this story, maybe that’s why he felt so at home singing ‘Ra-Ra-Rasputin’ in ‘The Power Of The Doctor’? (There’s certainly no other excuse for that scene I can think of…)



Another reason this story feels like a Hartnell is that the supporting characters are just so good: Denis Carey makes the elderly Keeper very different to his other Dr Who role, Who’s best dotty professor Chronotis in ‘Shada’. He’s kind of The Pope, an elderly figure that knows they’re going to die in the job but sees being plugged into spirit as the greatest thing they could be doing with their life. Sweet and innocent Kassia would have made a worthier companion even than her step-daughter Nyssa and it’s a shame she gets bumped off so early on – as much as she’s the de facto ‘baddy’ for the story, often characterised as an ‘evil stepmother’ (like the fairytale theme of the rest of the story) really she’s a kind person easily swayed; she becomes brainwashed by Melkur slowly, in waves, when her biggest crime was trying to tend it’s grave with flowers. Jealousy is her downfall, as it so often is in fairytales: she looks in the mirror and sees a step-daughter prettier than her getting her favourite job, while facing losing her husband to his life connected to source as the next Keeper, losing the two things that keep her happy – it’s a natural and very Human re-action for a Trakenite to be upset about but it’s enough ‘badness’ to let The Melkur do its thing. Brainwashings in Dr Who are two a Movellan Knut, but this is about the best in the series’ long list of them: you see Kassi’as mind wrestling with what Melkur tells her, unsure which view is right, desperate to do the right thing, but the more she argues the further she goes from her true pure self and the greater hold the master has over her. Kassia is controlled partly through her necklace: Byrne was inspired by Irish mythology and the ‘Jodhan Moran’, a bewitched collar that would kill anyone unfair or unjust and worn by a judge as proof of his kindness and mercy and that all his decisions were ‘right’ – only, in Dr Who, it’s used in reverse, as proof that even the nicest person can be corrupted. Kassia is a tragic figure, even more than her husband and daughter and excellently played by Sheila Ruskin. The Traken elders are very believable: old men who aren’t used to change and want things to stay the same, each one with a slightly different plan to take over but not sure how. Their disagreements with each other actively scares them in a way we’ve never seen in this story, because under the old Keeper nobody disagreed about anything (again, this is Leninist Russia in the aftermath of his death).  Of particular note are John Woodnutt as Seron, who continues to be one of Dr Who’s most reliable actors with several different roles to his credit and Robin Soames as Luvic, who was so perturbed at not having many lines that he decided there must be a reason he was the quietest Keeper and invented a stammer in rehearsals (JNT made him take it out!) – he’ll make the most of a similarly insubstantial role as ‘Chronolock Guy’ (that really is the credit, not a description!) in ‘Face The Raven’. You have to feel for poor Luvic: he’s the King Charles of the Dr Who world, someone whose waited his whole life to be Keeper while his long-lived predecessor takes over, only for events to mean he sits in power for all of a day!  



There are two characters that stand out though and who will cast a shadow over the next few years. One is future companion Nyssa, daughter of Tremas and step-daughter of Kassia, who doesn’t get as much to do as you might think (viewers looking out for her first appearance will be surprised that she only gets one line in her entire first episode) but already makes an impact. She was said to be named after a friend’s daughter’s name that Byrne really liked, Nerissa, but also surely named for ‘Gregory of Nyssa’, the Bishop off the island off the coast of Turkey whose teachings about balance and the need to be kind to all creatures was highly influential in the renaissance (if a bit less so today). His principles were very Trakenite: that God’s goodness is limitless and that fate is incomprehensible to hr minds of mere mortals and not to be resisted as God has a greater plan than we can understand. His idea was that a good Christian man could, if he so pushed, go through three stages of faith: the darkness of ignorance, the sureness of ‘spiritual illumination’ and a third troubled phase described as a ’darkness of the mind’ where one realises how incomprehensible God really is. ‘The Keeper Of Traken’ is, you could say, very much about a civilisation moving en masse from the second phase to the third. You sense that Gregory would have extended a helping hand even to the Melkur, as part of God’s will  and that he would have approved of the ambiguity around the ‘source’ (technically it’s a ‘bio-mechanical device’ that holds the world together, but unlike some Dr Who stories that take the mickey out of religion – ‘Planet Of Fire’ springs to mind – this could just be another name for God the way it’s written. If God was also a sort of giant spiritual internet connecting all beings as part of a greater whole. Again a bit like Communism). Nyssa is hugely promising in her first story before future writers make her a shallower soul all round. She’s a little like the original plan for Susan: shy, haughty, scared and vulnerable with extra-sensory powers, someone who feels as if they need a lot of looking after despite having more natural skills than most. Here she’s fully three dimensional, a nobleman’s daughter bred for a shallower but more peaceful life whose still ready to get her hands dirty quicker than anyone else in this planet and looking forward to her job taking care of the Melkur, her future traits of being prim and proper, quiet and distant, part of her breeding rather than her character – you always get the sense that, brought up on a different planet where the Melkur had gone on the rampage quicker, she’d have ended up more like, say, Tegan and she’s already straining at the leash of the narrow vision of life Traken offers her (not unlike the Doctor on Gallifrey in fact). Some fans see her future sudden turn as a gun-toting warrior in ‘Arc Of Infinity’ as being the single biggest out of character moment for any Dr Who companion (not least because it was intended as a cameo role for Leela) but honestly it fits with what we see here more than almost anything else she goes on to do as a companion: this Nyssa is loyal to a fault and brave enough to take risks that would shock other Trakenites down to their bushy velvet skirts, but she also loves her planet and society and has learned to respect the people telling her what to do. Sarah Sutton, chosen on the back of her leading role in ‘The Moon Stallion’ (one of the few things written by Brian Hayles not to feature Ice Warriors), will struggle in the future to make her voice heard as part of an ensemble, but here with so much camera time she’s magic and she even makes Matthew Waterhouse look good as the pair of bright teenagers bond over their shared sense of restlessness (only in his own debut story and his farewell is Adric written better than here). Not originally intended as a companion, full marks to John Nathan-Turner who saw Nyssa’s potential and decided she would make a good counterfoil to Tegan waiting in the wings; so last minute that they’d actually filmed the Doctor and Adric leaving in the Tardis and had to re-introduce her by curious means at the start of ‘Logopolis’.



And then there’s Anthony Ainley, who starts off as Nyssa’s gentlemanly father Tremas, upstanding and sweet and just a little bit crotchety (he’s the 1st Doctor all over again, but specifically the later 1st Doctor whose softened considerably by his last stories) and then in the last daring closing minutes becomes (mega huge spoilers that will ruin everything if haven’t seen the story)...the regenerated Master. He wasn’t in Byrne’s script at all (he was a new figure, a megalomaniac named Mogen) but Bidmead had been pushing to have The master back, to give the Doctor a regular foe again and was already half-thinking of bringing him back in ‘Logopolis’ – rather than have two similar characters back to back, though, why not make them the same? Byrne was only too pleased – he’d liked The Master and might have used him himself had the character been around. But weirdly, and uniquely, The master is played by someone else for most of the story and Ainley, who played The Master for more years than anybody, mostly plays another part in this story. At first we see the emaciated version we see in ‘The Deadly Assassin’ at the end of his 13 lives and it has to be said that ‘Traken’ is a neat mirror to what happens later to Matt Smith when the Doctor reaches the same age in ‘Time Of the Doctor’, only instead of invading a peaceful planet he defends it from evil getting in. And then, after Tremas gets a bit too curious with The master’s Tardis (oh that curiosity!)The Master takes over Tremas’ body. We’re a little bit robbed of that shock twist nowadays when chances are everyone sees Ainley in costume and assumes Tremas is the Master all along (and let’s face it, the anagram name is a bit of a giveaway given what they do every time The master returns during the JNT years). That’s all in the future though: serious brownie points to anyone who saw that shock twist coming on first transmission because it really does come out of nowhere, at the point when in any other story the Doctor would have ‘won’ and things would have been put right. It really helps make ‘Traken’ feel more than just another Dr Who story: it’s an inescapable fate in a story all about how you can never take defeating evil or goodness for granted.


What’s more, unlike most Dr Who twists that tended to be destroyed by leaks or Radio Times write-ups they managed to actually keep this one quiet. ‘After all, following Roger Delgado’s untimely death most fans thought they would never see the character again and even when he came back in ‘The Deadly Assassin’ he was a husk of his former self who really didn’t act much like The Master: it had been eight years since The Master had been seen properly. The irony, fully in keeping with the rest of this eerie story, is that the takeover couldn’t have happened to a nicer guy, someone whose so pure that he couldn’t even conceive of the Master’s grandfather clock being a Tardis-size trap (good life advice: never investigate a surprise materialising object that ticks). It’s a colossal tragedy for Tremas, for Traken (destroyed by The Master next time out), for the Doctor (who regenerates indirectly because of The Master’s masterplan) and for the universe (a lot of which is unceremoniously wiped out in ‘Logopolis’). Anthony Ainley was a man with so many Who connections its amazing he hadn’t been in the series already: he’d come to fame partly through his star turn in ‘Out Of The Unknown’, BBC2’s highbrow scifi response to Dr Who on BBC One, where so many of the production team worked, he was the illegitimate son of themed thespian Henry Ainley who was very close to the Pertwee family (and was in fact Jon’s Godparent) and his brother was Tom Baker’s one-time drama teacher and room-mate. For my money    he’s also one of the best actors who was ever in Dr Who, under-appreciated only because Roger Delgado as the ‘original’ Master was one of the absolute best – later stories will reduce his Master to a pantomime baddy doing bad things because he’s naughty, but here with a decent script behind him (and again in ‘Logopolis’ and final story ‘Survival’) Ainley’s one of the greatest threats the Doctor ever faces, driven by several centuries of being trapped in a statue plotting revenge with nothing to keep him alive but thoughts of cruelty and every bit as bad as the Doctor is good. And Tony is even better as Tremas, one of the gentlest of men we ever get to meet, with Ainley given as real chance to show off his full range in this story – it’s hard to believe that the close ups of the two pairs of eyes at the end, merging as one, is even the same actor, given that one is full of fading warmth and the other ice-cold growing in power. It is, however, a whacking great coincidence that The master just happens to take over someone whose name is an anagram of his own, almost as if this were a blatant clue in a long-running science-fiction series rather than something that was ‘really’ happening…
Interestingly Ainley doesn’t play The Melkur voice even though would seem the most obvious (and budget saving) thing to do: instead its Geoffrey Beevers, whose all too believable as the presence of pure evil even though he has nothing more to use than a few whispers – he’s so good at it that it’s sad we didn’t get at least a season of stories of him as The Master (he’s excellent as Big Finish’s Master of choice too, filling in the gaps between ‘Deadly Assassin’ and this story; in real life he was married to Liz Shaw actress Caroline John and its one of my great regrets they were never in a Dr Who story together before her untimely death, even on audio). The Melkur is a great concept: a statue of pure evil that’s been rooted in place, but can still create influence and overcome the whole of Traken, despite the fact that they can just walk away from it.  There is, so we’re told, a whole planet of Melkurs (one we visit in Big Finish audios but never on screen) and the Trakens used to be scared of them but not anymore in their Garden Planet Eden. They don’t even consider it a threat until it’s too late. The Melkur lets the story ask big questions, too, about mercy and kindness being misplaced in a world that doesn’t respect them: if ‘The Mind Of Evil’ is the Dr Who story that pushes the point for the rehabilitation of prisoners, of showing patience to people who fell into bad times and made mistakes by giving them a second chance, then ‘Traken’ is the story that makes the case, if not quite for capital punishment, then the idea that some beings are too evil to ever be allowed near your loved ones again, no matter how restricted and trapped they seem to be. 



Given the feeling of doom and gloom that hangs over this planet (a rare story where the Dr seems to solve everything, then it all unravels again when he leaves, as if even our hero’s morals aren’t enough to stop pure evil) it’s no surprise that Traken is the only named planet we recognise that’s in the half of the universe that gets wiped out in next story ‘Logopolis’ (a story which builds on directly from events here) – my one big fault with this story isn’t even with this story at all but the fact that nothing else really comes from it. Nyssa should hate The Master with a burning fury never seen in the series before. Not only does he have the nerve to wipe out her planet and everyone she ever knew before meeting the Doctor and Adric, he has the audacity to walk around in her father’s body while he does it, those kindly features contorted with hate. Combined with Tegan who’ll have her own beef with The Master in the next story (shrinking her Aunt Vanessa down to size in the opening minutes) I would have loved to have seen the new Who girls club together to bring The Master down to size somewhere, perhaps with the new merciful 5th Dr looking sad over in the corner seeing the bigger picture and trying to stop them while talking about mercy. Instead Nyssa barely bats an eyelid when she meets The Master again in ‘Logopolis’ and ‘Timeflight’, as if this story never happened. This could have been the single biggest companion-driven bit of drama in the series and would surely have been a natural place to take the series had Bidmead stayed on: alas the script editor’s already got cold feet and is getting fed up of clashing with the producer so as well as being nearly his first hurrah it’s almost the last he oversees from start to finish. And Johnny Byrne’s second story ‘Arc Of Infinity’ is mucked around with so much it doesn’t feel like the work of the same writer at all. There never was a second ‘Traken’, because pure good runs of Dr Who can seemingly only sustain themselves for a little while.  That’s a problem for the future though: as a story taken on its own merits ‘Keeper Of Traken’ is a lovely little four-parter, Dr Who’s prettiest and most beautiful tale in so many ways (until it abruptly isn’t), an old fashioned tale of trust deceit and betrayal and how thinking all the nicest thoughts in the universe won’t be enough to stop evil when it really wants something, dressed up in contemporary clothes that makes it feel new and up to date (or did at the time – although even then it seems like the most ageless, timeless 4th Dr story in so many ways). Yes it could have done with something more perhaps, a sub-plot or three and we never fully get to see properly how peaceful Traken is before the Melkur arrives (some people walking round smiling and handing out flowers isn’t quite the same thing). By and large though its as close to perfect as you’re ever going to get: it’s a good story for the Doctor, a great one for The Master, a highly promising one for Nyssa and has a feel all of its own that makes it unique in the Dr Who canon, that does something different with a planet full of good people rather than bad as usual. There’s so much to love about this story, from the costumes to the sets to the acting to the writing and a rare story where every department deserves applause and no one messes up anything much at all, no one! But especially the writing: there’s a\ poetry to this story (Byrne did indeed start life as a beat poet), a word choice that makes the characters, the planet and the dialogue all sing with a beauty few other Dr Who stories can match. While not too much happens before the shock ending nothing much happens with such grace and style that you can’t help but be entranced. Would that we had more Dr Who stories this lush, this pretty, this poetic, this thoughtful. Much under-rated.



POSITIVES + The Melkur statue is gorgeous and looks even more like something from 1981 than the planet and actors’ costumes do. After all this was an era where its heroes and heroines liked to stand still and stare vacantly down the camera with an existential shrug, perhaps with an occasional arm wave. What better way to represent that than with a statue and one that really fits the aesthetics of the time, like ‘The Wicker Man’ crossed with the Tin Man from ‘The Wizard Of Oz’ but with a very 1980s shape and design on top. The moment when The Melkur finally moves, just when you’re convinced yourself it’s a prop not a costume, is properly scary Dr Who and all the more so for coming in the middle of what’s been quite a gentle and placid kind of story.



NEGATIVES - There’s a lot of talking without much actually happening. So much so that this story badly under-ran at first because it was twenty pages longer than the usual Dr Who script without the usual stage directions and action sequences to fit in and people began to panic that this couldn’t be right surely?! In the end the script sailed over the usual word count in all four episodes and only barely made it to full time. Which is not to say ‘Traken’ is boring like some other Dr Who stories: you care about these people enough for what’s happening to them to matter and the conversations not relating to the main plot are some of the best bits. But too often there will be a part where the Doctor is arguing with someone about taking action, a debate about why they shouldn’t take action, a speech on how nothing like this has ever been necessary on Traken before, then sometimes a whole panel of Trakenites having yet another debate about it all over again. By the time this happens a few times in a row you want the Doctor to snap and start flashing his sonic screwdriver around to shut everyone up. Perhaps it’s a good thing K9 left in the last story -he’d have got bored and gone for walkies and accidentally started a war or something. Adric very nearly does that anyway at one point and he’s far from the most pro-active of companions as it is.



BEST QUOTE:What can’t be cured must be endured’



PREQUELS/SEQUELS: ‘Guardians Of Prophecy’ (2012) is Johnny Byrne’s intended sequel to ‘Traken’ which was intended for the 5th Doctor in 1983 then re-written for the 6th in 1984 before being dropped – the latter version ended up as part of series three of Big Finish’s ‘Lost Stories’ range (2012). It’s a good one, featuring the last few stragglers of the Traken empire who survived the events of ‘Logopolis’ and set up a new home on a planet they name ‘Serenity’. There’s a division though: do they try and make this planet a new Traken or do they overthrow their elderly elect and become more like other planets? Politics spill over when a thief is caught and sentenced to be thrown into a labyrinth (yet another one in Dr Who!) In a (spoilers) twist it turns out that the agitators have been stirred up not just by one Melkur but dozens, all of whom have been living on the planet and who have the ‘psychic power’ to pull the Tardis out of orbit as it flies past; they’re the ‘real’ thing, not The master in hiding this time. Along the way there’s scares with robot guardians, a living computer named ‘Prophecy’, a ‘shield of goodness’,  and arguably way too many expensive ideas to be done properly on a Dr Who budget in the 1980s, one of the reasons the story was reluctantly dropped. On audio though it’s another matter and like the majority of the ‘Lost Stories’ range the result is way more interesting than most of the stories that actually made it to screen that decade.  



‘Primeval’ (2001) is an early Big Finish story, #26 in their main Dr Who range and one of the first to be based around a specific episode. Writer Lance Parkin has a real feel for Johnny Byrne’s world of lush people being terribly nice to each other and makes good use of the Tardis’ time-travelling capabilities as the Doctor desperately scours the universe looking for a cure for a poorly Nyssa, back in the days when only Peter Davison and Sarah Sutton were making Big Finish stories (it slots into the gap between ‘Time-Flight’ and ‘Arc Of Infinity’ when Tegan wasn’t around). He can only find it on Traken 3000 years in the past, which is a huge culture shock for Nyssa who is traumatised by seeing her home world again. There are no Keepers around just yet and Traken is a planet that’s trying to be pure and good rather than the finished product we saw on screen, with mixed success. Seeing the Doctor as a danger to their world and Nyssa ill because of the ‘evil’ of her trips with the Doctor a baying mob tries to banish the Tardis. Long story short: it turns out that Nyssa has been infected by a powerful telepath who wanted to pull the Tardis to Traken. He’s quite a tragic figure for all his villainy: the Trakenites once considered him an all-powerful scary God but rejected him when they thought they could create a world of peace on their own. He’s responsible for the ‘Source’ of their great power, as used by all the Keepers, but they don’t want to know: basically he’s hijacked Nyssa looking for attention. In a neat twist the Doctor becomes the new keeper as he tries to restore order and balance long enough for  Nyssa to recover (which she does, by the way). It’s one of the wordier Big Finish stories, without a lot of action going on (something that only makes it feel even more like the TV story it’s based on) but one of the worthier ones too, one of the best 54th Doctor stories and especially recommended if you have a soft spot for both the original and Nyssa, who gets more audio-screentime than ever before.    



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