Time and The Rani
(Series 24 (20th Century), Dr 7 with Mel, 7-28/9/1987, producer: John Nathan-Turner, script editor: Andrew Cartmel, writers: Pip and Jane Baker, director: Andrew Morgan)
Rank: 283
‘Leave the gull –
it’s the Macaw I want’ (‘Time and The Rani – ornithologist adaptation’)
'Leave the gorilla –
it’s the Mara I want’ (‘Time and The Rani – Manussian Jungle adaptation’)
‘Leave the governor
– it’s the I want, man’ (‘Time and The Rani – Plutocracy Sunmakers adaptation’)
‘Leave the ghoul –
it’s the man I want’ (‘Time and The Rani – The Investigators From ‘Hide’
adaptation’
‘Leave the girl –
it’s the man I want’ (‘Time and The Rani – Dr 15 in ‘Rogue’ adaptation’)
Ah, the ‘strange matter’ of The 7th Doctor’s debut, the story that broke the few fans who’d remained loyal through the ‘Trial Of A Timelord’ crisis. This one story became associated with everything that was ‘bad’ about 1980s Dr Who. How did one story come to take so much flak from the Dr Who community, to the point where it was being slagged off in the press by its own fan appreciation society and came bottom in practically every poll for the best part of twenty years (till ‘Fear Her’ gave it some competition)? Probably because where other bad stories get one or two things wrong, finding things to complain about with this story is like shooting Skarasen in a barrel. That script! (particularly the dialogue). The incomprehensible plot! Those lurid colours! The acting! The slapstick! Sylvester McCoy floundering in his debut, part silent movie comedian and part an irritating git who won’t shut up! Kate O'Mara impersonating Bonnie Langford! (That one alone might just be the most misguided moment in all of 20th century Who). It’s the stuff of nightmares for most Dr Who fans, most of whom carried on seeing this story in lurid pink hues every time they shut their eyes. We’d been kidding ourselves that Dr Who wasn’t dead ever since the hiatus but this was the first time we truly couldn’t ignore how bad things were. The result was like seeing an old friend on life support.
Most of all though it’s
the timing: in any other era a bad story could have slipped through the cracks
but this one was sent out into the spotlight, with as close to a publicity
blitz as the series ever got in between ‘The
Five Doctors’ and ‘The TV Movie’.
The whole world (well, a million more viewers than usual) were watching and it
felt somehow as if ‘we’ had let them down, with a story that was as bad as
everyone had begun saying Dr Who always had been. We were in last chance saloon by now, the
show had only recently been ‘rested’ and its lead actor sacked. BBC head
Michael Grade was doing his level best to exterminate the show, openly mocking
it both inside and outside the corporation to the point where Dr Who had gone,
within a couple of years, from being a much-loved institution to a punching bag
for jokes about wobbly sets and children’s TV. We’d just sat through a muddled
season that made little to no sense and even long-term fans were beginning to
get anxious: this one really really had to be good. And it was bad – not just
poor, but bad. This would have been the perfect time for Dr Who to be
completely re-thought, to become gritty and ‘real’ and adult, to be everything
it had once been. Instead we get The Chuckle Brothers in space, in a story that
no one takes seriously up to and very much including the people making it. ‘Time
and The Rani’ is hated mostly because it gave ‘our’ enemies ammunition, finally
sinking to where this show was as bad as its detractors said it would be. How
did Dr Who fall so low in such a short space of time?
A million and one reasons
as it happened. In the aftermath of ‘Trial Of A Timelord’ the show had lost its
script editor Eric Saward and its star Colin Baker - ironically the only person
who wanted to be there – sacked. The problems kept piling up and the deadline
for season twenty four kept getting nearer, but producer John Nathan-Turner was
past caring – this was all meant to be someone else’s problem because he was
99% out the door, fed up of the fandom that kept calling for his head. It
should have been the perfect time for some fresh blood and he’d asked to leave,
with Michael Grade promising to move him on, but nope – come the 11th
hour JNT was told that there were no suitable vacancies and no other candidates
who wanted the job (surely a lie: even at its lowest ebb so many
children-turned-BBC staff would have given anything to work on this show,
especially as they had nothing to lose: if things went wrong they could just
have blamed it on the ‘old’ guard). The only thing this series had ready was
Bonnie Langford, still under contract for another year even though most of
fandom had been pleading for her to go too and a postcard reply from Kate
O’Mara, a surprise response when JNT had jokingly written to her on the
Hollywood set of ‘Dynasty’ with that year’s Dr Who postcards (which featured
her in her Rani crone’ costume’ from ‘Mark’) telling
her how ‘glamorous’ she looked and asking if she wouldn’t rather be up to her
knees in mud in a British quarry instead? (He was amazed when she said yes, fed
up with the ‘fakery’ of her new home and the emptiness of her series; Kate was
about the only person who still believed
Who to be the best most imaginative thing on TV).
Such circumstances would
have sunk lesser men and this story really shows off the best and worst of JNT.
On the plus side he snapped back into problem solving mode immediately, somehow
cobbling together a new series with nothing more than hope and a bit of string
and sheer confident bravado, inspiring the few people around him left to cobble
together. On the minus side things would have been so much easier if JNT had
brought in some old hands who were itching to steer the Dr Who ship back to
what it was, but he turned them all down, insecure enough to fear having anyone
on the series who had more experience than he did. As with Eric Saward JNT sought out youth and
inexperience, perhaps figuring that his new script editor could be bossed
around and moulded into shape – instead he got lucky with Andrew Cartmel who in
many ways was perfect for the job, new and well-mannered enough to be polite
but also fiery enough to stand up for his own ideas and care more for the job
than simply turning up (at the interview JNT asked the script editor what he
most wanted to do with his time in the show and was tickled when Cartmel replied
‘tear down the government’). Cartmel had
written lots of scripts and been a regular at the BBC’s script course but so
far nobody held enough faith in him to give him the TV experience he craved. He
was the suggestion of Richard Wakeley, the agent who just signed him and had at
one time been JNT’s agent too, back in the days when he was plugging his ‘A Day
In The Life Of A TV producer’ book (a rather fun day as it turned out, however
fictional: JNT must have longed to have such simple days again six years on).
Cartmel was the first script editor since producer Peter Bryant filled in
during the Troughton era not to have written for the show first and the first
since (obviously) first script editor David Whittaker not to have seen the show
before being invited to the job. Instead Cartmel knew the series through
comics, being a huge fan of Alan Moore who by 1987 was big in Marvel Comics and
2000AD but who had started out life writing and drawing strips for Dr Who
Weekly. Indeed, Moore was the first writer the new script editor reached out to
but, having put his early days behind him and being super busy, Moore turned
him down. That’s the deeper, darker, ‘Batman Returns’ type comics rather than
the ‘Batman’ TV show type by the way: many fans in 1987, who only knew Cartmel
from soundbites about his love of comics in Dr Who Magazine, assumed it was all
his fault that ‘Time and The Rani’ turned into the silliest ‘TV Comic’ style
since ‘Underwater Menace’ but no:
that was someone else’s fault entirely (Cartmel says that his input into ‘Time
and The Rani’ was reading the final script as a fait accompli and his only
suggestion, a new opening, became null and void once Colin Baker turned it
down. But then everyone has tried to distance themselves from this story,
pretty much).
Instead it’s Pip ‘n’ Jane
Baker, returning for their third story in a row, even though most of fandom
hated their guts too. You can see why JNT did it: after coming to his rescue
for ‘Vervoids’ and ‘Ultimate Foe’ they were about the only people who hadn’t
let him down lately (even though fandom felt the opposite) and it made sense,
if Kate O’Mara was interested, in getting The Rani’s creators back on board and
using her fame as a launchpad for the new season. Most of all they were quick
workers. Perhaps a bit too quick: much mocked for their fairytale ideas,
archaic language and sloppy worldbuilding, their work had always felt like a
‘first draft’ anyway, even back in the days when there was a decent script
editor around to sharpen their work up. ‘Time’, written quicker than any of
them, is riddled with errors and sullied with an incomprehensible plot. The
Rani, for reasons best known to herself,
wants to take over the world and rule over it, causing order through
chaos. Wjich admittedly is an argument I’ve seen a few black hole-style dense
Brexiteers argue but really The rani is a huge brain herself, she shoud know
this isn’t going to work. This also couldn’t have been further away from the amoral scientist
we first got to know in ‘Mark Of The Rani’, the sort of foe that couldn’t care
less if their test subjects lived or died as long as they got results. Turning
her into The Master just doesn’t work. And it’s a very ‘Master’ plan too:
kidnap some of the biggest brains in the universe and accumulate their
knowledge in one big brain to create a ‘scientific formula’. Only Pip ‘n’ Jane
only seem to know three geniuses (with others taken from across the rest of the
universe) and none of them seem built for this sort of thing. Einstein, a
theoretical scientist, is especially ‘wrong’ for a story about chemistry – it
would be like, well, expecting Mel Bush to know scientific theory beyond
computers (a mistake the writers had already made in ‘Foe’ as it happened). To
show how much research the writers did he’s even wearing socks, which he
famously always refused to do. Worryingly Einstein is used for his
‘mathematical ability’, which in reality was near zilch (Einstein got other
people to do his sums for him as his grasp of numbers was so poor). More than
that though, intelligence, like time, is relative. I probably know a lot more
than Roman astronomer Hypatia simply by virtue of the fact that I live in a
time when the internet and vast libraries mean any scientific information I
need is at my fingertips. Stick Hypatiai in my time and show her how to use a
computer, though, and she’d know more than I ever possibly could within an
hour. Plus this is perhaps the worst example of the ‘grandfather paradox’ in
the series: if The Rani did succeed and change history, wiping out life across
time including on Earth, all three of these people would be dead. It’s a plan
doomed to disaster – and The Rani, unlike The Master, doesn’t stoop to
disaster.
It doesn’t help that the
plan is sold to us using more technobabble per minute than perhaps any other
story. Pip’s brother was a research scientist so the Bakers grilled him over
scientific ideas and were delighted in a way that only scifi writers can be
when he started talking about ‘restless quarks’, as discovered by Edward Witten
(who the Bakers refer to as simply the ‘Princeton Scientist’ – perhaps bro
Baker couldn’t remember his name for them?) Funnily enough, since the alien
race The Quarks had appeared in ‘The Dominators’ in 1968 scientists had
discovered that they were indeed ‘dominated’ in ways that seemed to defy logic.
Basically for decades it had been assumed that quarks could change between
protons, electrons and neutrons, depending how much ‘charge’ they carried in their
‘fractions’ when added together: sometimes the numbers were below a ‘whole’,
sometimes above, sometimes spot-on. However having quarks with ‘up’ and ‘down’
numbers in perfect synch did something weird: they created something called a
‘Lambuda particle’ which is impossibly heavy – planet size heavy in just a few
grams, while the charge remains stable rather than dissipating the way it
normally would. It’s as if the quarks had a ‘reset’ button, like the way
holding control alt and delete all at the same time resets your laptop, only
more complicated because science always is. That’s a rather weird idea for a Dr
Who plot (why would having something heavy help you take over the universe? By
rights The Abzorbaloff should be running everything in the Dr Who worlds) but
there are a lot of weird Dr Who plots to be fair. What’s a bigger way is how
it’s explained, endlessly, in ‘bafflegab’ jargon that leaves you absolutely
lost. Just take a sample: one notorious sentence alone invokes a fictional gas,
the fictional idea of a ‘chronon shel’ (chronons being particles of time), a
scientifically plausible but suspect use of gamma rays to ‘wake them up’ and a
deeply unscientific procedure involving an experiment on primitive cortexes in
the brain. I can’t tell you the amount of guidebooks and scientific papers I’ve
studied to get that far while going ‘eh?’ and I’ve probably missed something
out there because, well, this is a plot for scientific researchers, not your
typical Dr Who viewership.
The plot isn’t all the
Bakers’ fault though. It was JNT’s suggestion of a ‘big brain’, because that
was the only idea he could think of that Dr who hadn’t done yet. The Bakers had
also done a lot of genuinely thoughtful world-building for their planet of
Lacheyerta, making it like the ‘Garden of Eden’, a paradise full of lush trees
and ripe fruits that makes it all the worse when (much like Traken, though the
Bakers also seem to have come up with the metaphor that the modern equivalent
of a lazy paradise is a ‘leisure centre’ without knowing about ‘The Leisure Hive’) it’s invaded by an evil
outside source (that wasn’t the only Biblical reference either: ‘Loyhargil’,
the lost artefact/‘solution’ at the end, is an anagram, of ‘Holy Grail’. Though
there the Bible references stop, unless there’s something about playing spoons
or hanging upside down like a bat I missed in my RE lessons). The whole point
of the Lachertyans is that they’re soporific, not weak, the lush warm climate
making them naturally lazy. Only director Andrew Morgan worried that filming in
a forest would make this look like a historical (as if planets can’t have a
history like Earth’s) and instead decided that it would make a nice change if
the story was…recorded in a quarry. Three to be exact: Cloford Quarry (Shepton
Mallett), Wetdown Quarry and Whatley Quarry, Frome (and thus just round the
corner from where F1 world champion Jenson Button was born: he’d have been
seven at this point and might well have got there on his bike). Only nobody
thought to change the script, so you have a lot about the Lachertyans living in
paradise that just looks like slate and gravel to me. Usually when we have
dystopian settings like this in Who it’s for stories like ‘Androzani’ where scratching out a living in such
hardship turns these people ‘hard’ and tough too. Instead the Lachertyans are a
pretty weedy bunch all round, the sort who would rather take a nap than go to
war to defend their planet. You’d think growing up here they’d all talk like
characters from ‘Trainspotting’, yet somehow end up at ‘Ivor The Engine’. It’s
also hard to think of this planet as a restful paradise with so much noise
going on – even with lines overdubbed in post-production sometimes all you can
hear is shifting gravel (or maybe Lachertyans are weird and find the sound
comforting?!) Weirdly the Bakers seem to have taken the name from the Latin for
‘lizard’ and the costume designer picks up on this by giving them scales, but
they’re not cold-blooded; indeed they’re so emotional that at time they make
Bonnie Langford’s reactions seem ‘normal’. It doesn’t help that the beings on
this planet, who reportedly evolved so greatly, seem to have stopped somewhere
around 1985: what with their day-glo green skin, hairdoes that are a unique
cross between a Mohican and a Mullet and shoulder pads they look as if they’re
taking part on ‘Fun House’ and were dressed by Pat Sharp.
Ah yes, talking of
children’s telly somewhere along the way someone (the director perhaps?) has
got the idea that he’s making children’s TV. Many fans talk about the pantomime
aspects of this story and it’s hard to watch without going ‘they’re behind
you!’ every few seconds. The slapstick quote is brutally high, whether it’s the
new Doctor going limp in classic ‘Rentaghost’ style, the slapstick and
continual pratfalls or The Doctor playing the spoons down Kate O’Mara’s chest
(which sounds, off the back of Dynasty as if Dr Who is going in for ‘sexy’ but
most definitely isn’t). The Bakers, incidentally, defended most of this story
to their dying day but always claimed they were horrified when this last scene
was inserted (after McCoy kept the
production team amused during the location hotel wrap party) and if the Bakers
were ashamed of something then you know it has to be bad. For his part McCoy
assumed the producer was both joking and a bit tipsy so was shocked to find it
was actually included in the script. It’s not just one scene though: 90% of
this story is played for laughs, with some of the worst excesses of Dr who
acting, even from those who’d been in the series before and ought to know
better (such as Donald Pickering, playing ‘Beyus’ – named for ‘Obey us’
according to the Bakers - who’d been so good in ‘The
Faceless Ones’ and Wanda Vantham who’d also been great in ‘The Faceless
Ones’ (weird coincidence that – we won’t get another actor from that story
returning until Pauline Collins becomes Queen Victoria in ‘Tooth and Claw’) and ‘The Image Of Fendahl’. Incidentally, her son
Benedict Cumberbatch is ten years old by now so this may well have been his
first exposure to Dr Who – and might explain why he’s never been in it, even
though his links through his mum and being in Steven Moffat’s ‘Sherlock’ make
him the single biggest obvious actor we haven’t had in the series yet). Bonnie
Langford, still a TV newbie, spends most of the story declaiming as if she’s
talking to the back row and even Kate O’Mara starts winking to the camera and
breaking the fourth wall as if she wants the audience to boo and hiss her, in total contrast to her last appearance. It’s
weird.
Especially when we get
the usual sudden bursts of random violence that seem to pepper all sorts of Who
scripts in the 1980s and seem to come out of nowhere. The Lachertyans might be
a weak bunch but they deserve a better fate than they get in this story,
trapped in The Rani’s lethal ‘time bubbles’ that hurl them against the high
cliffs (trees in the script) as they haplessly batter against the edges where
they explode, their skin vapourised so they turn into skeletons). What makes it
worse is that the two Lacherytans that suffer this fate are arguably the
nicest, certainly the most innocent, young girls of the sort you would normally
put money on surviving until the end credits. The Doctor, too, causes an even
more innocent alien, the bat-like Tetrap, into a trap so that he dies an
equally horrid death – so much for this being children's TV, it might well be
the wickedest thing he does to an individual outside Shockeye in ‘The Two Doctors’ (assuming the guards he
knocks into a vat of acid in ‘Vengeance
On Varos’ is an accident). This wouldn’t be so bad if the effects were bad
– but such is the brilliance of the computer graphics that they seem like the
most ‘real’ thing here. And that’s perhaps the biggest issue with ‘Time and The
Rani’ – it’s a story crying out to be real, to be gritty, to be done as if it
hurts. But director Morgan doesn’t know what to do with a script like this so
makes it all seem like a fairytale (my theory is that he was hired to make
things easier for Colin if he did decide to come back for one last story which
had been the original intention – the two had become close on the last series
the actor had made before getting his Who role, as Dr Dudgeon in ‘Swallows and
Amazons Forever!’, the rather shoddy adaptation of Arthur Ransome’s brilliant
novels. Though admittedly that story borrows from the two weakest, ‘Coot Club’
and ‘The Big Six’ where The Norfolk Broads are no substitute for the beauty of
The Lake District). The Bakers just about got away with things in ‘Mark Of the
Rani’ because their story was set to the grim and soot of the Industrial Revolution,
while ‘Vervoids’ had a ‘real’ industrial spaceship setting and everything in
‘Ultimate Foe’ was fake. But ‘Time’ has none of that to help it. So we end up
with a fairytale story where nothing seems real and nothing seems to matter.
This might not have
mattered if they had got Colin back as planned and made him the still, brooding
centre of the story, but they’ve hired Sylvester McCoy, an actor who – despite
his background with the Royal Shakespeare Company and some gritty plays – was
still in 1987 best known for being the sort of eccentric stuntman who stuffed a
ferret down his trousers on live TV and spent his weekends being shot out of
canons in the Ken Campbell Roadshow. JNT had no ideas who should play the part
this time, beyond wanting a contrast to Colin Baker’s height, weight and
Sixie’s ego. Sylvester ended up the only real person on JNT’s very short
shortlist and hired in a manner very reminiscent of how both Pertwee and Tom
Baker were hired: McCoy had spent his whole life being told ‘you’d make a great
Dr Who’ on account of being surely the most eccentric actor not to have yet
been in the show and with nothing to lose dropped a line to the production
office when he heard Colin was leaving. By coincidence one of the few people
JNT still looked up to at the BBC, former Who vision mixer turned BBC producer
Clive Doig, bumped into the producer and on hearing he needed an actor
suggested someone he’d really enjoyed working with on a children’s TV series,
Sylvester McCoy. JNT was annoyed at first: given how things with Saward had
turned out he assumed it was all part of a ruse to get one over on him, but
Doig persisted: McCoy was appearing round the corner in a play built round him,
‘The Pied Piper of Hamlin’ and maybe the producer should check him out. JNT
went and realised his friend was right: McCoy was everything he wanted – short,
thin, silly, reminding him of the first Doctor he’d worked with as production
manager, Patrick Troughton. It helped that he was a good friend of Bonnie
Langford’s, having spent the best part of two years playing opposite her in a
touring production of ‘Pirates Of Penzance’ (‘I got married to her every night
of the week – and twice on Saturdays’ he quipped to DWM). Best of all, JNT was
nervous of asking anyone to be in the programme given the toxic environment
when everyone was against the show but he already knew McCoy was interested.
Typically the BBC highups didn’t agree, Jonathan Powell insisting they audition
McCoy with two other names, since long forgotten: Dermot Crawley best known for
1990s Irish play ‘The Weir’) and David Fielder (who had a small role in ‘Superman
III’). The auditions were held in a hurry; so much of a hurry that Bonnie
Langford was busy in a stage production of ‘Peter Pan’ (the one where McCoy
later crashed her photocall and appeared in all the papers). Instead JNT called
on an old friend, Janet Fielding, to read opposite his new Doctors. Given that
she was almost the only other person the producer still trusted he was relieved
when she too told him that McCoy was easily the best. JNT bravely told Powell
to get stuffed and that he’d found his Doctor – amazingly he and Grade let him
run with it (indeed, it’s a sign of how anti-Colin Grade was that he considered
‘Time and The Rani’ a ‘huge improvement’).
The thing is though,
McCoy isn’t who the fanbase expected or wanted.
They wanted big dramatic names who would take the role seriously, not a
little weird man playing the spoons. It’s like they made the new Doctor
deliberately unpopular and weedy from the first: in 2005 a newly regenerated 10th
Doctor has the power to re-grow a hand, but this one is so feeble-minded he can’t
even work out when The Rani, someone he’s known almost all his life (and is
still, somehow, on her first regeneration against all the odds while he’s on
his 7th!) is dressed as his companion. It’s like they tried so hard
to go the other way from ‘The Twin Dilemma’
(a regeneration with a violent, unstable Doctor) that they went to the silly comical
extreme instead rather than something in between that, I don’t know, wouldn’t
put people off watching. McCoy was thrust into the part too quickly without
time to think about what his Doctor would be like. It speaks volumes that he
ends up wearing the same straw hat he wore to the auditions and that his
biggest ‘trademark’ is an adapted version of the 6th Doctor’s
umbrella from ‘Revelation Of The Daleks’
(purely because someone handed McCoy an umbrella during the first and
inevitably wet day of location filming and the producer thought it looked good;
the idea was to go against the 6th Doctor’s brash costume by having
one that looked normal in long shot but eccentric close up. Incidentally, the best
scene in the story is the largely improvised one, added at McCoy’s suggestion,
of him leafing through the Tardis wardrobe and trying on the Doctor costumes
that still survived. There’s even one of JNT’s Hawaiian shirts there as an
injoke!) Andrew Cartmel is so new he hasn’t had time to sit down with McCoy and
discuss anything yet, while Pip ‘n’ Jane wrote for Colin’s Doctor, assuming
(rather naively) that he would come around to the offer of recording one last
story, even though it most likely meant being out of work for another year to
fit round it at a time when he really needed work quickly. The only person with
only power to tell McCoy what he ought to be doing is JNT, who’s only suggestion
is comedy. When Pertwee was hired on the back of his comedy voices he had
people around him to tone it down and give him the confidence to go the other
way and be ‘straight’, but Sylvester doesn’t have that. not yet. It doesn’t
help that, whilst a keen Whovian in his youth, McCoy hasn’t seen any since the
1970s and not regularly since the 1960s, when everyone still considered the
show ‘children’s telly’. So Sylvester ends up looking dazed, playing the spoons
and falling over the way he always did on every other kid’s show and nobody
thought to tell him ‘no’. A sizeable amount of fans tuned in for the first
episode, where the 7th Doctor is newly regenerated and unstable and
one step away from hurling custard pies and mashed potato at The Rani, and
thought everyone had lost the plot. McCoy will get so much better – even as
early as episode three he’s finding his feet and playing things from drama and
tension as well as laughs – and by the end of his run will arguably be as great
as actor in the lead role. Unfortunately it takes him time to get there and his
performance in episode one especially ranks amongst the worst in the series,
unbeaten until as late as ‘Deep Breath’ (when Peter Capaldi is every bit as
unsure). The one part of this new Doctor I like that nobody else seems to is
his mistaken twisted sayings, a JNT idea worked on by Cartmel (much to Pip n
Jane’s horror). At their best they’re really funny, in a script that so often
isn’t – ‘every dogma has it’s day’ is one of my favourite lines of the 1980s in
fact, while I’m quite fond of ‘absence makes the nose grow fonder’ and ‘fit as
a trombone’ (though, yes, ‘time and tide waits for snowman’ is perhaps a pun
too far). At its worst it makes the 7th Doctor so different to the 6th
in an easily identifiable way: Colin’s Doctor got angry with Peri if she so
much as messed up a phrase from a quote but now Sylvester’s Doctor is merrily
going his own way, on the boundaries between enlightenment and absurdity. We knew how the ‘old’ Doctor was going to
behave – they throw the comedy gags at the 7th in the hope that will
make him more like the 2nd Doctor even though that wasn’t how he
worked at all (well, only in reunion stories), but what makes him most like
Troughton is that unpredictability, after two Doctors in a row you could count
on at all times. It’s almost enough to forgive the comedy pratfalls and spoon
playing. Almost.
Episode one is rightly
seen by fandom as the worst of the worst, the lowest point to which the series
sunk. Particularly the opening pre-credits sequence. From the pathetically
ordinary regeneration (seriously? They couldn’t come up with anything better
than ‘tumultuous buffeting’, the phrase the Bakers used in their Target novel?
See the ‘prequels/sequels’ section below for all the many writers for the
spin-off books and Big Finish audios who refused to let that pass. Though to be
fair to the Bakers the regeneration was planned for the end of the story and
re-written last minute when Colin understandably told everyone to sod off) to the
sight of Sylvester in a curly blonde wig with sparkly pixie effects to Kate
O’Mara dressed as a sexy pantomime dame murmuring ‘leave the girl – it’s the
man I want’ it’s the single biggest cringefest in the history of the programme
bar none. Over the top of this is Keff ‘Cocophony’ McCulloch, the most inexperienced
incidental composer the series ever had working out how to write TV on the spot
– and failing (for years a rumour went round that he got the job because JNT
fancied his girlfriend, currently the lead in his panto ‘Cinderella’ who also
happened to be the niece of Dolores Whitman, Tegan’s Aunty Vanessa from ‘Logopolis’. Which makes them either TV sisters
or TV cousins! This was of course before fandom found out JNT was gay and he
was just being kind, offering a friend some work). Keff was actually hired to
redo the theme tune but, on finding out that Ron Grainer’s contract meant only
he could be credited and not the arranger, he got this score as a consolation
prize. Alas Keff had just been given another much needed first job which landed
the same week, the very different job of musical director on Irish singer Rose
Marie’s Telstar record ‘Sentimentally Yours’ which he worked on during the day
and Who at night, complicated by the fact that he was given a faulty copy of
the rough edit with the timings and ‘pulses’ all out – rather than ring up for
another copy, Keff simply re-recorded from scratch every single scene playing
all the way through). Even if you hang around till the end of the episode the
unbelievable sight of The Doctor being fooled by Kate O’Mara dressed as a
Bonnie Langford that’s clearly aged a few decades and changed her voice there’s
slim pickings for Whovians. Nobody believes in this story, nobody acts like it
matters, clearly nobody wants to be there including the actors writers and
producer and there’s nothing to get your teeth into, nothing to care about. Other
stories can get away with things that go wrong because they feel like they’re
making an important point, whether it’s about what it is to be a Human, or an
alien, or anywhere in between. Most Dr Who stories can get around that if the
dialogue is top notch and the regulars get lots of lovable banter, but this s a
pip n jane script where everyone talks like theoretical scientists from Bonnie
Langford on down and with a companion made to be deliberatelty unlikeable and a
dr we don’t know even when story ends. It’s the television equivalent of candyfloss, but the naff sort that
taste of chemicals. If it has no nutritional value and isn’t nice to taste then
why bother consuming it all? The general public and casual fans alike turned
away, never to come back for the rest of the century. Honestly Colin got lucky,
though it probably didn’t feel that way at the time: just think how awful it
would have been if he’d come back and had this as his last story?
However the rest of the
story isn’t actually that bad. I mean it’s not good, barely even okay but
equally it’s not as bad reputation suggests. There’s a nice sub-plot in the
story about identity, Pip and Jane actually going away and thinking about what
it would mean to wake up in a new body, confused and going through a crisis of
confidence. We’re used to seeing newly hatched Doctors unstable but the 7th
Doctor is more haunted than unstable, convinced by The Rani that he used to be
a ‘bad man’ (an idea Steven Moffat will recycle in ‘Deep Breath’) and desperate
to break away from everything he was. In the context of what was going on with
the series that says a lot more about the state of the show than any amount of
laborious ‘trial’ scenes. The Doctor doesn’t know who he is yet, in a story
where everyone else is pretending (at least when The Rani is dressed up as Mel –
most fans would have been happy to have Kate O’Mara stay in the part for good),
still the one spark of truth left in a world full of illusions and lies. Not
since ‘Power Of the Daleks’ has a
regeneration story so obviously played around with this idea, making the Doctor
the only ‘stable’ thing that can save the world, even when he isn’t himself
stable. I like the Tetraps too: of all the aliens-evolved-from-animals-and-gaining-sentience
scenarios in the series bats make the most sense: they can see differently
(four eyes and 360 degree vision! Even if comically the actors forget and still
tilt their heads the usual ways), have echo-location (a great metaphor in an
episode about working out the ‘truth’ and seeing through words) and hang upside
down, a perfect metaphor for a monster that do things ‘a bit different’. The
Bakers don’t just make them complete bats though (that would be ‘bats’) they
combine features from ‘rats’ too to become something unique. They look pretty
darn great too apart from the close-ups where they stick out their silly long tongues
(another thing that makes this story like children’s telly), the costumes by
outside contractors Susan Moore and Stephen Mansfield less obviously men in
suits and far more impressive than similar era creations like Terileptils or
Vervoids. They were apparently popular enough to be the first non Dalek/Cybermen/Ice
warrior monster toy you could buy too (yet another sign that everyone
considered Dr Who for children suddenly), though then again Dapol released them
alongside two separate Bonnie Langfords in two separate costumes against all
common sense so maybe not (it was an age before we got a Doctor doll post Tom
Baker). The only thing that doesn’t quite work is the fact that they speak
English backwards, something so evolutionary unlikely as to be impossible even
for a science fiction series. The Lacherytans, too, are a nice idea that almost
comes off, a sympathetic race of conned aliens of a sort we used to have all
the time but haven’t had in ages now (‘Snakedance’?
Though the Manussans seemed like Humans) with their scales ‘n’ tails a
combination we haven’t had before. Only the silly hairdoes prevents them being
better regarded.
Everyone who isn’t in a
rush and is taking the usual time about things also give their all. Full praise
to the set designers who not cobble together a second, superior Rani Tardis
interior at short notice (JNT had asked for the original for ‘Mark’ to be preserved – another reason to do this
story – and lost his temper in a big way when he found it had been scrapped by
accident) but also a ‘leisure centre’ that’s anything but leisurely and the
entrance etched into the quarry surface in an effect that Dr Who had been
trying to pull off ever since Omega’s antimatter world in ‘The Three Doctor’s but had always
fumbled till now There’s even a moat with stepping stones. There doesn’t need
to be one in the script but someone went the extra mile because they wanted
this story to work – in the context of everything else that’s the single most
amazing thing here! The costume designers nail the aliens. The biggest praise
of all though should go to CAL, the third party of computer boffins hired to
make this story’s pink skies and special effects. Unused to working in TV
either they came in way under budget (unique in 80s Who) and were so
enthusiastic about working on the show they not only threw in the computer
graphics and teletext style print for free but gave the show recycle footage
they’d made for their last job, space shots in a documentary about Halley’s
Comet. For the first time in Dr Who history you can’t see the join between what’s
real and what’s fake (well, not unless you check thoroughly frame by frame
perhaps) and the fact that they do this in a story that’s entirely about truths
and lies and whether to believe in your eyes means it matters more than it
usually would. ‘Time and The Rani’ is unique then, in that it’s a story hated
not because the effects go wrong and it looks so bad but because all the usual
reliable things go wrong (the acting, the writing, the directing) and it’s such
a waste of the one time Dr Who actually looks not just adequate but the equal
of the best things on television at the time. I’m not the first fan to suggest
that watching this story on mute is a far more rewarding experience than
watching it with the sound on. ‘Time and The Rani’ looks magnificent, if only
you can ignore what everyone’s saying and doing and thinking and, well, pretty
much everything else about it.
Even so I have a soft
spot for this story. I mean I don’t like it or anything – that’s going too far –
but it’s one of those hated stories like ‘Underworld’
‘Terminus’ ‘Timelash’ and ‘The Time Monster’ where I can at least
see what they were trying to do and how good it could have been, before one
wrong thing too many tipped it on the balance scale from passable to
unwatchable. ‘Time’ isn’t one of those stories that should never have been
attempted ever under any circumstance (the usual suspects like ‘The Dominators’ ‘Voyage Of The Damned’ and ‘Orphan 55’) but one that got seriously
unlucky timing-wise. With more weeks I suspect Pip n Jane Baker would have
worked out the holes in the plots (one of the biggest not mentioned yet: how
come The Rani happens to have a costume just like Mel’s hanging round given she’s
never met her? It would make more sense if she’d dressed as Peri. Another is
that The Rani’s plan seems to rely on The Doctor being groggy and unstable, but
as no timelord ever regenerated in such a dub way before she can’t have been
relying on this just by shaking the Tardis up a bit. While I’ll never get over
the irony that one of the series’ dumbest ever scripts is about genius). With
Andrew Cartmel there from the start rather than the end I suspect he could have
made a tighter, more sensible story out of the same ideas (despite hating the
Bakers even more than the average fan did, given his autobiography ‘Script
Doctor’). Had this not been his regeneration story a later, more confident
Sylvester McCoy would have known when to put his foot down and say ‘no!’ With
another director who treated Dr Who seriously at face value it might yet have
worked. Had this story been for Peri or a companion who felt as if they
belonged to the ‘real’ world more then this story would have fared better too. Most
of all had JNT gone as he wanted to and a new producer had come into this story
and not been blinded to the problems it could yet have been rescued and/or
binned. But no: it’s the one with an unstable Doctor fighting an unstable Rani
so different to before and her unstable plan, which involves the single worst
disguise in the show’s history, in between failing falling over and playing the
spoons. This is one of those stories where it was always going to go wrong
because nobody felt fully in charge: not the actor just hired, the new script
editor who arrived after it was commissioned nor the producer who thought he'd
left the show only to be brought back at the last moment. It's the sort of
story where nothing goes right and everything goes slightly wrong, the one that
more than any other fans watch to make fun of and then hide from the general
public in shame. It’s no one person’s
fault though (except perhaps Michael Grade’s): this is the inevitable side
effect when you mess around with a programme so much that nobody knows what to
do with it anymore and the one person nominally in charge of the asylum already
had his heart set elsewhere. Given all
the things working against it, I’m actually amazed that the last three episodes aren’t worse.
POSITIVES + CAL’s ‘bubble
trap’ is a special effect tour de force. Though it’s fake computer image drawn
on top of the action you can’t tell – it really does look as if the actors are
trapped inside it and the shot of it being launched in the air is so good I
would have sworn it was the only part done for real the whole story, not the
only part done solely on computer. They’re a great idea too – I mean, they’re
overkill for what The Rani needs, but in TV terms it’s such a wonderfully
visual image, unlike anything the series had done before. Whisper it quietly
but I’ve long gone against fandom in quite admiring their new opening title
sequence of the Tardis in a ‘bubble’ too – assuming you watch it on mute or
overdub it with Delia Derbyshire’s original arrangement, of course, not the
Cacophonous version here. I never understood why these guys weren’t invited
back every story for the rest of the 1980s after this.
NEGATIVES - It's a
longstanding complaint that people in Drip 'n' pain Baker's scripts don't talk
the way people do. Any people. This really shows in this story's big emotional
scenes where people are trapped or scared or - God help us - impersonated
by a renegade timelord in a girly squeaky voice and yet sounds more like the ‘real’
Einstein than this story’s ‘fake’ Einstein. I mean, I know what all those words
mean separately but together? That’s a different matter. All together now: ‘it
is a fundamental postulate that all motion is relative…’
BEST QUOTE: ‘You
don't understand regeneration, Mel. It's a lottery, and I've drawn the short
plank’.
PREQUELS/SEQUELS: ‘A Business Proposal For Mel’ aka ’24
Carat’ (2021) is the official title for the trailer of the surprise release of
season twenty-four on blu-ray (the ‘twenty-four carat gold’ promised by the
trailer seems a bit optimistic given that it’s one of the most divisive years amongst
fans, along with season twenty-three, but I appreciate the pun was too good to
miss!) The trailer also works as a sort of prequel to ‘Power Of The Doctor’
and Mel’s eventual return in ‘The
Giggle’ and ‘The
Legend Of Ruby Sunday’ by filling us in on her ‘missing
years’ for the first time, a ‘Dragon’s Den’ style voiceover telling us that
she’s now ‘a business leader, philanthropist, galactic entrepreneur’ with her
inevitable carrot juice business now a ‘business empire stretching across the
galaxy’. Mel’s given a pitch for the re-developed ‘Paradise Towers’ hotel by
the Blue Kang Drinking Fountain (‘All our cleaning robots undergo rigorous
safety checks, most of them aren’t homicidal killers anymore’, with just two
deadly two incidents lately ‘way down on figures from last year), Dragonfire’s
Ice Colony (‘Mr Melty’ and a range of lifelike ice sculptures) and Derek the
Tetrap’s bubble trap bath (‘If you don’t invest you will be liquefied and fed
to the hatchlings!’) Her only investment: a hooded monk that plays the spoons
and a ‘holographic’ collection of their adventures together – something they
call blu-rays on Earth. Though the silliest of all Pete McTighe’s blu-ray trailers
so far, it’s still great to see the 7th Doctor and Mel reunited and
it’s all good fun, while seeing Mel as a proactive character in charge of her
life for a change is very welcome and clearly paid the way for her comeback.
‘The Rani
Reaps The Whirlwind’ (2000) is one of the BBV spin-off productions that can’t
legally use the Doctor Who name anywhere but does feature lots of characters
from the series. In case you hadn’t guessed from the name, this one features
Kate O’Mara reprising her role and unusually for BBV this is an audio-only
adventure. The story follows on directly from ‘Time and The Rani’, with the
tables turned and the timelord now the prisoner held by the Tetraps (painful!)
She’s put on trial and condemned to death but, always a good talker, offers to help
the Tetraps cure a plague that’s blighted them for centuries, Tetraprybius, in
return for her life. But does the ends justify the means, given that it leads
The Rani to start up her evil experiments on Humans again, accelerating their
lifespan so they last just a couple of weeks? No in short, especially as The
Rani’s obviously just trying to save her own skin and be in a position of power
again. Though it’s great to hear Kate clearly having the time of her life
again, in a role that’s a far more fitting farewell than ‘Dimensions In Time’
ever was, this story is still dogged by Pip ‘n’ Jane Baker’s worst excesses as
writers and without a script editor to contain them they go off the deep end at
times here, with characters who all talk weirdly and scifi clichés most fan
fiction writers would dismiss as too ‘obvious’. The result is arguably the
weakest BBV story, although a lot of Rani fans I know consider it better than
any story she ever got on TV! There was a spin-off novelisation too, in the
style of the Target ones for proper TV episodes, and a ‘making of’ audio
documentary very much in the style of the later Big Finish ones (only
longer). If The Rani is your favourite
thing to happen to The Whoniverse ever then you need this story as it’s a good
one for her; for the rest of us maybe not so much.
‘Spiral Scratch’ (2005) by Gary Russell is the ‘Past
Adventures Novels’ attempt to tell the end of the 6th Doctor’s life
properly and while it was a lot better than the opening to ‘Time and the Rani’
it’s still less than satisfying. The 6th Doctor has taken Mel to the
reference library planet Carsus where he looks up an old friend, Professor
Rummus. Only he’s been murdered, or at any rate he has in this multiverse. Suddenly
everywhere the Dr and Mel visit is a parallel universe and one of them even has
The Valeyard as The Doctor. Remember how all time happened at once in ‘The Wedding Of River Song’?
This messy book is a bit like that. Only even more confusing, with lots of
Doctors and Mels around too. In the end The Doctor triggers his own
regeneration himself in order to prevent himself turning into the Valeyard. A
nice idea, with The Doctor sacrificing himself to save the universe, but a bit
too muddled to work. Gary himself considers this his weakest Who book, written
when he was at his lowest personal ebb and Dr Who folklore was the last thing
on his mind – often writers are wrong about their own work but in this case he
might be right.
Big Finish had a bash at being all Sixes and Sevens
too, with a very similar plot actually - yet their ‘The Last Adventure’ (2015)
is a masterpiece. The first three stories in the set are pretty forgettable,
standard Big Finish fair really, but Nicholas Briggs’ finale ‘The Brink Of
Death’ is one of the few bits of Dr Who to ever make me properly cry, giving old
Sixie the finale he deserved and never got on TV. It’s quite a complex story
but it fits with the start of ‘Time and The Rani’ well so bear with me for
this!…The Doctor and Mel are debating where to go next: Lakertya, peaceful and
friendly home of the Tetraps, sounds nice. However their flight is hijacked
when The Valeyard physically replaces The Doctor, the transformation happening
when he is under the Tardis console fixing a typical problem – suddenly the
ship is taking them to a quite different planet. Suddenly Mel can’t remember
‘her’ Doctor and has a headache; has she just glitched through to another
future where the Valeyard won? The Doctor, meanwhile, wakes up in a void
without even white robots to keep him company. Eventually he’s discovered by
Genesta, a member of the Celestial Intervention Agency, who’s a bit like the
Doctor (curious and a bit of a rebel, who doesn’t follow rules and is where
she’s not supposed to be – she even ran away to Earth for a while), who reveals
that he’s not just on Gallifrey but physically inside the matrix. She also
assumes he’s dead, because that’s where all dead timelords are uploaded and his
identity is due to be wiped in a few minutes. The Doctor has to convince her of
his rightful place as a timelord, at the same time the Valeyard is intent on
wiping out The Doctor’s memory across the universe, but Genesta is having a
hard time believing it (she matches him for scepticism too!) For this
regeneration in particular, being erased from existence and being forgotten is
the worst thing that could possibly happened to him and Colin Baker turns in
the performance of his life as his Doctor faces almost certain death while
slowly coming to terms with the fact that the Valeyard really is the darker
side of him, all the parts of himself he keeps hidden. For all his bombast this
has always been the Doctor most likely to face an existential crisis about his
impact on the universe and The Doctor’s slow move from absolute denial to
melancholy acceptance is brilliantly handled. Mel, meanwhile, is exploring an
alien planet with the Valeyard-Doctor when she bumps into fortune-teller
Lorelas, who explains that everything she thought was true is a lie. Mel also
bumps into Genesta whose got so fed up of the Doctor claiming Mel will vouch
for him that she’s tracked her down – only Mel can’t remember him at all. The
Doctor has one last final confrontation with The Valeyard who tells him he only
has six minutes to live and should stop wasting them. Back in the matrix
Genesta frantically researches The Valeyard in the matrix’s ‘forbidden files’
looking for clues on how to stop him and discovers that The Valeyard isn’t an
actual person at all but…a weapon. Genesta takes all this to her superior
Storin, but (spoilers) he turns out to be The Valeyard in disguise!
Genesta travels with The Doctor back in time in her
Tardis to the exact second when The Valeyard took him over and distorted his timeline
– with the help of microscopic telepathic creatures from a volcano planet as it
turns out. Only this is all part of The Valeyard’s backup plan as he knows what
The Doctor plans to do and he transports Sixie and Genesta to these being’s
home planet, fulfilling his promise of giving them an ‘interesting mind’ to
feed off. Only (spoilers) it’s all another lie: The Doctor’s actually still in
the matrix and Genesta never existed, she was just ‘a shadow’, an invention
based on The Doctor himself and the exact sort of person he would trust,
invented purely to distract him. Confronting The Valeyard again once he knows
the truth, The Doctor finds that his ultimate foe has replaced every timelord
with his own identity (much like The Master in ‘The
End Of Time’) and plans to replace all the ones in
the past too, including Rassilon which would give him infinite power to shape
Gallifrey and the universe in his own image. The Doctor travels back in time
again, sending himself a telepathic message to go to Lakyerta as planned
because the radiation in the planetary system would kill the telepathic
creatures inside him, as well as destroy his mind with The Valeyard in it too
(luckily it’s not lethal to Humans so Mel is safe). The Valeyard hasn’t counted
on this: he’s seen The Doctor’s mind and knows how strong his survival
instincts are and how egotistical this version is but Sixie is unrepentant,
yelling ‘a future as you is no future at all!’ The 6th Doctor gives
one final glorious impassioned speech, saying that if he goes he wants to be
remembered for the best of him not the worst and saying goodbye to all his
companions over the years, be they on TV, audio or in books, thanking them all
for shaping the person he was. The Tardis is then pulled to Lakertya, just as
in the beginning of ‘Time and The Rani’ and The Doctor gives his last,
typically wordy words: ‘I’ve had a good innings, all those lives I have lived.
I hope the footprint I leave will be light but…apposite’. However this is not
the end; he’s comforted by a Scottish burr, an unlisted cameo from Sylvester
McCoy urging him on with the familiar words that ‘it’s far from being all
over’, Dr 6 smiling up at Dr 7 and accepting his fate now that ‘the future is
in safe hands’. Then the Doctor wakes up as Sylvester McCoy, the Valeyard in
him vanquished forever. A far better
ending than simply bumping his head on the Tardis console and regenerating! This
story is also clever in that Mel has been unconscious the whole of that last
journey, her memory of The Valeyard’s return wiped and she’s a bit delirious
herself from the radiation which explains perhaps why The Rani fools her so
easily. Mostly, though, it’s the perfect finale to a regeneration who never got
the time he deserved on television, his reputation now rehabilitated thanks to
Big Finish who prove just how great Colin Baker could have been. Probably my
favourite of all the (thousand?) Big Finish audios out there. The fact that it
exists, canon-wise, between two of the all-time worst stories, only shows up
how lacking in ideas and Dr Whoyness ‘The Ultimate Foe’ and ‘Time and The Rani’
are: this here, this is why we love this series and this character so much.
Utterly superb, from first second to last. It certainly beats ‘tumultuous buffeting’!
Amazingly, in this distinctly dismal year for Dr
Who, Greenlight aka Coast To Coast aka Daltenrays (they went through more
regenerations than The Doctor in their short life!), an independent production
company run by producers Peter Litten and George Dugdale, pitched to make an
independent Dr Who film and unlike some others (Tom Baker and Ian Marter
amongst them) they actually got quite far. ‘The Return Of Varnax’ by Mark Ezra
beat many others by actually getting the money together from celebrity pals (including
Dire Straits bassist John Illsley), but took so long doing it that they missed
the BBC deadline for handing over the film rights (the TV rights, of course,
would have remained with the Beeb). It’s a messy, ambitious, sprawling script,
closer to ‘Space:1999’ than Who, with ruthless baddy Zargon enslaving the
planet Trufador. They’re about to execute a criminal hidden in robes – it’s the
Doctor! (Which one? Not a clue – presumably not McCoy as he’d have been busy on
the TV series and might not even have been cast during the first draft. It does
read very much like his later, more manipulative character though).The Doctor
breaks multiple Gallifreyan laws by creating a time warp that ‘eats’ a missile heading
towards him and leaves him to escape in the Tardis. And that’s just the pre-titles
sequence! The Doctor is put on trial (again!) for his work, exiled this time to
Gallifrey so the timelords can keep an eye on him. Meanwhile Varnax, a wicked alien cyborg, has
discovered Earth’s voyager spacecraft and declare war, whilst in the most Dr
Who-ish sequence of the lot two rather wet young rebels try to take over his
kingdom and fail. They send a distress call to the timelords which The Doctor,
desperate for contact with the outside universe, receives. Only it’s all part
of a trap set by Varnax. It turns out that he’s a timelord too, on his last
regeneration (based on The Valeyard?) and he needs a time rotor like the one in
The Doctor’s Tardis to escape his own exile. There’s a lot of capturing and
escaping, ending in a big epic chase sequence where The Tardis is pulled into
the sun (how the heck would that have looked on screen in 1987?!), something
that gives The Doctor enough power to go back in time and put things right. We
then get another big finale on a desert planet with The Doctor escaping from
‘Sandroids’, robots built to withstand the desert storms and built like preying
mantises, perhaps the most original bit of the whole script. There’s a neat bit
using Stonehenge as a transmitter (just like in ‘The Pandorica Opens’),
The Doctor hiding out in The Smithsonian Museum and cameos from K9 (who is
hiding in his kennel in the Tardis) and The Brigadier (whose troops are in
charge of guarding Stonehenge for some reason). It all sounds a bit too much
doesn’t it? This is one of those ideas that could have been either brilliant or
terrible, depending on how it was made and what the dialogue (which sadly has
never been made public) might have been like, with just enough Dr Whoy ideas in
there to work but a lot of other stuff that might not have worked at all. Read
the full twelve page synopses for yourself in Jean-Marc L’officer’s book ‘The
Nth Doctor’ (1997).
The same production company had a second bash with a
proven Who writer, Johnny Byrne, who had something of a chequered past (‘The Keeper Of Traken’
is a true masterpiece, but few fans rate ‘Arc
Of Infinity’ or ‘Warriors
Of The Deep’ that highly). ‘The Time Lord’ was
revised multiple times between 1988 and 1990, at the request of the different
Hollywood companies who liked the script but insisted on tweaking it, so it’s
hard to get a fix on what the story would have looked like with so many changes
going on. L’officer has four separate versions: ‘Varnax The Creator’ is basically
the first quarter of the previous script, only with the difference that Varnax
is The Doctor’s friend from his academy days, the script spending time
discussing how two actually quite similar people, bright and rebellious, could
have ended up living very different lives. There’s a lot more fighting in this
version and a lot less talking, with armies known as Mordreads chasing The
Doctor across time and space. Morgana, an incidental character in the first
draft, is now a full blown love interest who broke The Doctor’s heart(s) at the
academy by choosing Varnax over him, only to realise she chose the wrong one
when The Doctor rescues her from certain death. Version two ‘The Crystals Of
Power’ is more of a ‘Keys Of Marinus’
style quest story, The Doctor chasing crystals needed to power a huge timeship
and Varnax standing in his way. Varnax captures The Doctor and the crystals and
planets start exploding, The Doctor put on trial for his part in proceedings
and sent to a penal colony for his sins. He escapes, ends up hiding out in
Victorian London (where he discovers the true identity of Jack The Ripper –
again), buys a time rotor on an illegal market stall and ends up on the Santa
Maria, Christopher Columbus’ ship destined for the new world, before meeting
the president of the USA (a fictional one from the future) and finally turning
up to defeat ‘dark Varnax’ who has been driven insane by his power.
Version Three ‘The Immortality Bullet’ adds the idea
that Varnax and The Doctor together created an object that would grant the timelords
immortality but they clashed over whether to use it, The Doctor unsure if the
timelords are ready for such power when they’re so corrupt. He has a kid sister
in this version, Lyria and an ex, Zilla, who ran off to be with Varnax but now
lives a miserable life amongst his abominable experiments deep in his dungeons.
There’s far more material set on Gallifrey and a lot less in space (presumably
for budget reasons) but there’s still time for a stopoff in Idaho, where The
Doctor ends up losing his memory only to be saved by local cowboy Billy, and a
19th century American Indian villager. The Doctor’s life is saved
and in return he becomes the tribe’s ‘medicine man’ (they’re really pushing the
USA audience in this version!) There’s a definite move away in this variation
from things happening to consequences of stuff happening off screen, with an
older Doctor meeting all the people he used to know when young and discovering
that he’s kept his innocence while the timelords’ great age has corrupted
theirs. You have to say, though, this sounds like the weakest version of the
four, too Earthbound and without the scope of the others. The final version ‘The Genetic Duplicate’ has
The Doctor a lonely wandering exiled traveller, much like The 1st Doctor
when he first met him. Billy, now in the present day, turns out to be the exact
duplicate of twisted tyrant Varnax, with The Doctor taking him into hiding to
keep him safe from his enemy’s experiments extracting his energy and turning
him old. It doesn’t work: Billy is attacked and The Doctor feels guilty.
There’s a chase through the time vortex that makes The Tardis explode, the tiny
fragments still powerful enough to swallow Varnax’s spaceship. Billy and Varnax both collapse, with Billy
taken back to Earth by The Doctor where he finally recovers. How funny, that a
story that started off so epic, should end up another simple Dr Who story about
doppelgangers! Though it’s hard to tell without seeing a finished script I
reckon the idea peaked with versions one and two, though version four could
have worked. Certainly all four sound more entertaining and make (slightly)
more sense than The
TV Movie we got!
By now it was becoming clear that the producers
weren’t going to get the full financial backing they wanted for the script as
it stood, but they weren’t ready to give up entirely so they got a third
producer on board, Felice Arden, and hired Johnny Byrne to write an entirely
different script. ‘Last Of The Timelords’ took the best of the old ideas and threw
in some more including a new idea, so influential on Russell T Davies’
‘comeback’ series, that Gallifrey has been destroyed in some awful war and that
The Doctor was now (altogether) ‘the last of the timelords’. Only he isn’t
quite: in this version it’s Varnax who destroyed Gallifrey, the former friend
turned bitter enemy. He’s the kind of evil genius who’s not good at small
details though and all the Tardises perished alongside the timelords leaving
him trapped on a dying planet, all except the Doctor’s – the one timelord who
managed to escape his home world in time. The rulers of Gallifrey pleaded with
The Doctor to destroy his time rotor so that Varnax cannot find it and destroy
other worlds, but to do that would mean to lose the secret of time travel
forever and The Doctor can’t bring himself to do it, so instead he lives out his
days out on Earth in hiding. At first he’s living in Ancient Rome just before
the decline, with many a parallel between the way it falls apart and Gallifrey,
then London in 1903. Varnax meanwhile is near the end of his last regeneration
and still has ideas about immortality but needs a ‘raw source of energy’ that
can only be found in other timelords. Varnax sends his Mordread army to locate him
(they’re more like cyborgs in this version, created out of Varnax’s
experiments) but The Doctor has programmed a timeloop ‘booby trap’ which means that
the Tardis dematerialises for thirty years, by which time Varnax should be
dead. Oddly it never seems to occur to The Doctor to go back in time and take
Varnax out before he can carry out his wicked plan! Instead The Doctor has
wiped his memory of all knowledge of Varnax and Gallifrey, in a move not unlike
‘Human Nature/Family Of
Blood’ (complete with a ‘memories coming back in the form
of drawings’ scene). These scattered memories so confuse The Doctor that he
ends up in an asylum (which is not a nice place to be in 1903) where he
befriends one of his helpers, a teenage girl named Lotte, the only person who
believes him. She helps him escape an experiment designed to rid him of his
‘hallucinations’ and flees with him, only to find out the scientist behind them
is yet another timelord (so that’s three of them still alive now – they really
should have changed this title!)
The Doctor escapes just in time for the timeloop to
end (in an atmospheric scene under Big Ben) when the Tardis is times to
re-appear, only to find he was betrayed and that Varnax is waiting for him
after all. A tense action scene sees The Doctor and Lotte flee to The Tardis at
which point The Doctor’s memories return. The Tardis then flies to the
oddly-named planet Raquets where everyone makes a racket (no, sorry, I made
that bit up) where The Doctor teams up with two more exiled Gallifreyans, Menon
and Ganji (so that’s five now…) Menon is captured by Varnax and dies under
torture rather than give The Doctor’s secrets away (in an oddly sadistic and
gruesome scene that seems out of place with the rest). The Doctor feels guilty,
Ganji is in mourning and Lotte is totally lost on an alien world. The trio are
captured where The Doctor meets his ex Zilla, the woman who chose Varnax over
him, but who is now having doubts about her hubby’s megalomania. She chooses to
side with The Doctor and release them. An insanely angry Varnax tries to get
revenge by ramming The Tardis, which causes the dimensional circuits to come
unstitched, leading to a very surreal nightmarish sequence. Then, as Zilla
reverses his time experiments to try and wipe him from existence, Varnax uses
his final trump card and activates Lotte, a ‘sleeper’ agent whose really been
passing information back to Varnax all this time. Gonjii, who’s quite fallen
for her by this time, is forced to kill her to save The Doctor, as Zilla and
Varnax kill each other. A really downbeat ending has The Doctor and Ganjii
mourning all the people they’ve lost and trying to rebuild Gallifrey from
scratch. Bit of a downer that one – goodness knows what viewers watching it
somewhere around season twenty four (the ‘comedy’ one) would have made of it!
There was a second version too, with some further
tweaks made to keep costs down and sub-plots taken out (such as the really long
pre-credits sequence setting the main plot up). Instead of London in 1906 the
date is moved forward to 1934 and features a fascist rally, The Professor plays
a much larger role in events with Lotte not turning up till later in the script
where she’s joined by a young lad named Marcus, while ‘Rackets’ has become
‘Raquetz’. The biggest twist is that Lotte is no longer a sleeper agent but
Varnax’s daughter, sent into exile with her memory wiped for refusing to take
part in his experiments and it’s her, not Zilla, that chooses to save The
Doctor by killing her own father. Both versions are a bit messy and a bit too
epic while full of too much Gallifreyan lore for a casual audience but they
could have worked, even in an era when Dr Who was off the telly and at its
lowest ebb. They certainly tried hard to make it and got very close – closer
than anyone before The
TV Movie came along - to making the series in a last minute rush
with French company Lumiere as co-partners. Sadly they just ran out of time,
with a promise with the BBC to start filming before a set deadline of the end
of the tax year 1993-1994 that they just missed. Chances are the BBC would have
been happy to extend their deadline ere it not for the fact that they’d just
been made a better offer by a company, Amblin, waiting for the deadline to
lapse so they could have a bash. And you can read about how that story goes
under ‘The TV Movie’.
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