Monday, 16 October 2023

The Waters Of Mars: Ranking - 38

 

The Waters Of Mars

('Thanksgiving Special' (honest!), Dr 10, 15/11/2009, showrunner: Rusell T Davies, writer: Russell T Davies, director: Graeme Harper)

Rank: 38

   'Drink the Waters of Mars a Day to help you work, rest and play, now with added alien mind parasite' 





 


There was a lot of talk, circa 2009, about what mankind’s next move as a species might be. After ignoring manned space travel for the better part of half a century the lure of the stars was growing stronger and there was suddenly a practical discussion about what might need to be done to build a liveable base on Mars. The very day that writers Russell T and Phil Ford (who’d written almost all the best episodes of spin-off show ‘Sarah Jane Adventures’ and ‘Torchwood’ between them) sat down to discuss this story in July 2008 the probe ‘Phoenix’ discovered evidence that there had, at some stage, been water on our sister planet, the biggest sign pointing towards the creation of life at some time in Mars’ history. It was in the air, the way space travel had been in the 1960s and scientists were falling over themselves to congratulate each other – so of course Dr Who was going to do a story about it. The difference with the Apollo space programmes that led to the moon landing in 1969, though, was that instead of being our birth-right our trip into space and an achievement mankind should be proud of, heading into space this time was more a way of escaping the problems at home. Most talks of space focussed on whether man came out of a sense of pessimism and the gnawing sense that something had gone fundamentally wrong with our lives on this planet. Growing awareness of climate change, the rise of terrorism, global divisions, cuts to NASA funding and the dog-eat-dog world of capitalism where millionaires would rather spend money mucking around in space than save people on the planet they were actually on were all leading to a very different feeling whenever people looked to the stars, not to mention the dawning realisation of just how much work it was going to be. After our giant leap for mankind we’d gone backwards and were using other planets as our ‘just in case’ policy for the day when we would inevitably trip over ourselves and fall over, with Mars increasingly spoken about as a one-way mission we might never be able to come back from. Last time around Dr Who largely ignored the moon landings until they were actually happening, then laughed at them by imagining a time when space travel was old hat (‘The Seeds Of Death’) before a cautionary tale where mankind became too smug, treating space travel as something that was everyday even though space was both extraordinary and fraught with peril (‘Ambassadors Of Death’, an eerie choice to be on TV just as Apollo 13 was taking place). So of course rather than the intrepid explorers heading into space, in Dr Who something was bound to go wrong.


Russell T Davies plugs right into the melancholy feeling in the air that a best case scenario was that man would find it very hard to establish a base on another planet at all and a worst case scenario that man would fall apart before he even got there. ‘The Waters Of Mars’ is one of the darkest, saddest stories in all of Who (and a long way away from what people expected from Ford’s reputation of writing child-friendly fare). It’s pitched to us as if it’s going to be a very traditional kind of story, full of plucky pioneers doing their best as they establish the first base on Mars against the odds and growing their own food, the best of us in one handy base-sized guise, but then (spoilers) it all goes wrong spectacularly and even the Doctor can’t save the people who, in other Dr Who stories, would have been deserving of being saved through their ‘good karma’. Even more than that it’s a story about how the Dr tries to save everyone anyway because he sees that as his calling and he’s convinced that he knows better than the universe, only to find out that there are bigger things at lay than he can comprehend. For ‘Waters Of Mars’ is a tale of corruption, of how even the best of intentions can come unstuck due to arrogance with mankind paying the price for daring to think that they could simply bring their problems with them to another planet and start again, plus The Doctor’s arrogance that being ‘the last of the timelords’ means the rules don’t apply to him (though it didn’t start off that way, Russell picked up on how many fans were concerned with his smugness and wanted to pull off a ‘reverse Colin Baker’ and have a character who gradually became less likeable as bad things happened to him). So we get a sombre story where everyone loses and even the people who survive at the end of all this shouldn’t have done and treat The Doctor’s meddling with a fixed point in time as a power no one person should ever have.


The plot comes from a clever idea that’s been left unanswered since Dr Who’s earliest days: how come the Dr refuses to alter history from our past ‘not one line’, but can dabble away quite happily in our future: surely, to a timelord, all times are the same and set in stone? This story is a fixed point in our near future, from roughly another half century’s time from first broadcast in 2059 and appears in all the future history books 9and a website that looks like a nicely retro BBC news website, complete with the font and colours from 2009) as a set event, another step in mankind’s wobbly journey into space. I’d always wanted to see what a future ‘fixed point in time’ might look like, Dr Who’s equivalent of Star Trek’s ‘prime directive’ of not getting involved. After all, in a series where so many people seem to have time travel then the past should be re-shaped by people and changing all the time (and often is in Steven Moffat stories). By and large Dr Who has treated this as if the Doctor and friends were film-makers studying nature, observing but unable to interfere, though from the first there was always something of a discrepancy between how the historical and futuristic stories were treated: anything in the past was treated as a fixed point that had actually ‘happened’ and everything in the future was fair game. But of course that’s not true for The Doctor for whom all time and space is equal and everything is set in stone by the end of the universe (either ‘Frontios’ ‘Utopia’ or ‘Wild Blue Yonder’, his three furthest trips into the future). So The Doctor has to observe these brave people walking to their deaths (because it inspired the people who come after them) even though they do everything ‘right’ – they’re kind, funny, brave, daring, spend two years travelling to a planet they know they might never leave and do the right thing just because it’s ‘there’. This crew at Bowie Base One really are the best of us. But they’re meddling with things they don’t understand and are no match for the nature of another planet. Equally The Doctor tries to do the right thing by them, spends forty-five minutes telling everyone he has to leave, even walks away for ten long painful minutes hearing the sound of their death in his ears and the flash of their demise in a screen that plays in his space helmet, until he snaps and avenges their death. Why should good people have to die? Why should he uphold the laws of the universe when his own people died standing by them in the time wars? But tragedy is a side effect of exploration and a side effect of travels through time to places that have to be in order for what comes next to matter. Sometimes, no matter how much you want to stop bad things happening, you’re powerless. So The Doctor feels here.
After all, ‘Waters Of Mars’ is the first Dr Who to be properly hit by the banking crisis of 2008, the worldwide recession caused by the greed and recklessness of Wall Street. It had already been agreed that Russell would end his time on the show with five specials culminating in the 10th Doctor’s final story over the new year of 2010, but while ‘The Next Doctor’ was clearly going to be the 2008 Christmas special (titled ‘Red Christmas’, where Bing Crosby’s ‘White Christtmas’ was the only record onboard and had become a running joke) and ‘Planet Of the Dead’ was pencilled in for Easter this one had no official slot. For a while it was the story for Christmas 2009 before the BBC asked if the Tennant finale could be kept for a big family audience over the festive period (Yuri isn’t playing around with a ‘no trespassers’ solar panel in the first draft – he’s decorating a beacon like a Christmas tree!) For a time this was the Halloween special which would have suited it nicely, being one of the creepiest of Dr Who horror stories. But then news came back that while the license fee the BBC relied on was sacrosanct the company was in trouble: Japan had pulled out of a deal to show Dr Who stories due to the financial crisis which left the Dr Who team in a bit of a financial hole and the collapse of the chain Woolworths, which had an exclusive license to BBC DVDs for a time though not Dr Who ones that sold too well, hit finances further. For a time this special was cancelled altogether and it was only the production team pushing to get it made that we had this story at all. Even then it got its so-called ‘thanksgiving slot’ (actually a week early and a week before the show’s 56th anniversary) simply because the BBC knew ITV had nothing good on that week and wanted a ratings boost, nothing more complex than that. As it is this is actually an ‘anti-thanksgiving special’, given that a family of strangers turn up and eat the food they’ve created with their own bare hands on a dead world - and die because they underestimate the local (invisible) population.


‘Waters Of Mars’ wasn’t originally this dark. Back when it was intended to be a festive story it was actually a frothy feelgood story before the dark finale about an alien princess who came to Earth and stayed away from her captors in a normal everyday Hotel (a lot like ‘Delta and The Bannermen’ – and see ‘The God Complex’ and ‘Joy To The World’ for how many Dr Who writers come up with stories about hotels while staying near TV centre for meetings and how few are ever actually made compared to how many are suggested). Russell handed his idea to Ford, knowing how good he was at family-friendly fare, and he enjoyed writing it: there were secret corridors that led to alien planets and a carnival filled with circus creatures in the middle that would have stretched the budget to breaking point but sounded good fun. Executive producer Julie Gardner thought the draft script was great but Russell was worried: it had strayed a little too far into fantasy and away from scifi and felt ‘wrong’ to him (ironic really given the pantheon ‘Gods with magical powers’ he wrote for the Disney years, although to be fair we still haven’t got to the end of that arc yet. I wonder if we ever will?) It also felt ‘wrong’ heading into the finale with The Doctor on a high, having enjoyed himself following an Earth granny and visiting aliens.


No, The Doctor needed to learn his lesson. And the news about Mars landed at just the right time for a story rooted in the ‘real’ world still but a different world, away from Earth. Russell may well also have been thinking about the Victorian astronomers (who in turn inspired the earliest Victorian scifi writers like H G Wells) who saw the scarred lines running round Mars’ surface and the newspapers who declared them to be canals to shift papers, evidence of intelligence life (accidentally or deliberately mis-translating the word ‘Canneli’ meaning ‘channels’ – they’re actually an optical illusion of the pock-marks from craters and the layout of various rocks. But just supposing for a moment that they weren’t? Very Dr Who, making the ordinary extraordinary, even on a different planet). So Phil went away and tried again, writing the basis of what you have here, a traditional ‘base under siege’ story that happened to be on Mars, with enough optimism to be a decent Christmas story though it was a close-run thing with many casualties. Russell loved the script but found there was one line that really stayed with him, a throwaway comment by Ford that The Doctor really wanted to change time but couldn’t. Why couldn’t he? So Russell re-wrote the story to be a darker look at the Doctor’s psyche where he tried to change events and can’t (it’s not actually any more re-written than a lot of Russell-era scripts by outside writers and is still maybe 75% Ford’s work, but the BBC was having problems getting other countries to buy these specials and thought as Russell was still quite a big name it would help in the publicity. After all, the original idea was his too: both of them).   


Russell particularly liked the thought of going to the near-future, something he’d never done before (a majority of his era stories are set in the present day and the ones set in the future are way way waaaay in the future). He wanted the children of the day watching, knowing that this was well within their lifetimes and might be their future (Adelaide Brooks, the commander, was born the very year this story was transmitted and thus is a babe in arms at the time. She could be your kid sister if you were a child watching this, because who knows what the future has in store for people!) So we have a plucky team of the best of us, out there in the great beyond, growing their own vegetables and playing practical jokes on each other to break the monotony of years in space, people who seem ‘just like us’. There’s a particularly clever opening that has all the hallmarks of the Russell era, in that you can instantly see who people are in a few lines of dialogue and can easily match thm to your class or workmates: Yuri has spent his spare time creating a ‘no trespassers’ sign at the cost of a spare solar panel, even though there can’t possibly be any trespassers on Mars. We see the crew’s reaction: Adelaide, the boss, is fuming and disapproving but also knows well enough that her staff need to let off steam. Mia giggles nervously, loving the joke but afraid of getting into trouble. Tarak responds with a wry shake of the head: typical Yuri! Roman is too busy with his robot Gadget and has missed it. Adelaide, meanwhile, is watching a ‘transmission’ from her family full of news from home and impatiently muttering for them to get on with it as the base is hit by another solar flare, our first indication we’re out in space and so like a mobile phone breaking up (Adelaide is very much a female General Cutler from ‘The Tenth Planet’, barking orders at his men then cooing over his little boy ion video calls back home). And then The Doctor, a trespasser, rocks up anyway. It’s a very clever bit of writing: three minutes in and you know these people better than most whole Moffat or Chibnall era stories, an extended believable ‘family’ who don’t always get on but who all mean well. Now The Doctor and in a few minutes The Flood arrive and you’re already anticipating what the varying reactions will be to both.  


And when they die it matters. It feels like an affront, so that you sympathise with where The Doctor’s hearts are even when your head knows he’s gone too far. From the first there’s a sense of doom and gloom that hangs over the base. The Doctor knows five minutes in that everyone here is going to die, he just doesn’t know quite how. I suspect Russell, who loved sneaking pop songs into his scripts, had been listening to just what a surreal, scary song David Bowie’s ‘Life On Mars’ (the reason for the base’s name) is: everyone treats it as a fun pop number nowadays but really it’s a dark and edgy song about how when things go wrong mankind continues to expect to be saved by someone, despite centuries of evidence to the contrary, and how we’ll all still be thinking the same when we die on a future planet. Mankind assumes its alone when it lands on Mars, but maybe there’s a reason we’ve been nervously looking over our shoulder at our nearest neighbour across the centuries and it turns out this world isn’t the dead planet it seemed from the outside. Even though from a 2009 perspective they’re thriving: they have bio-domes (actually The National Botanical Gardens Of Wales in Carmarthenshire) full of crops and even birds to ‘keep the insect population down’  (in a last minute addition to the dialogue when it was discovered that the lights from the camera crews woke them up – something that hadn’t been considered on a night shoot!) But Adelaide talks openly about all the pollution, economic horrors and struggle back home. It’s going to take a long old time for Mars to be properly terraformed enough for people to live here properly and even the bit of food they can grow is killing them.


Russell gives children everywhere the evidence that eating vegetables can be deadly (did this storysingle-handedly cause the obesity crisis in a generation? Discuss…), thanks to an invisible alien that hides in the water when these settlers try to grow their own food before taking over Humans, who are after all made up of quite a lot of water themselves, in a ‘possession’ that’s surely the scariest in all Dr Who, despite being one of the lowest budget (it’s basically great ghoulish makeup and the poor actors dripping with a hose that’s hidden in their cheeks: it took forever and a lot of sleepless nights to get the effect right, which Russell said caused him more problems than any other during his entire time as showrunner).The irony: in 2009 water is being greeted as a sign that colonising Mars might be easier than we thought, as the planet was capable of it at some point. In our ‘real’ world the big debate is about whether a base on another planet will ever be sustainable because of the bulk of resources we’d have to take with us that aren’t native to the planets, especially water. However in Dr Who water is the deadly monster that kills. The Flood is a brilliant simple but powerful and believable creation that (mostly) doesn’t speak and so again like close cousin  Midnight’ robs the 10th Dr of his greatest ability, being able to outwit and out-argue people (even Dr 10 can’t do banter with a disembodied invisible virus hiding in the water). For there’s no arguing or negotiating with nature: it does its own sweet thing oblivious to the control Humans want. Now in theory The Flood should be a terrible monster: they’re basically bacteria that got a bit lucky, once banished by The Ice Warriors (very much conspicuous by their absence in this story) to a glacier and buried until The Humans need a water source. It could have gone so wrong – they’re the very definition of monsters who are a bit wet and don’t do much except stand there – but so good are the makeup, the performances and the sense of threat that they’re terrifying. The effect is really creepy too when shot in the dark with the ‘cracked face’ makeup as if water is being drained out of the base members (and a shout out to the actors who go from being warm and friendly to cold and creepy remarkably well, especially Sharon Duncan-Brewster’s Maggie). It’s the Dr Who equivalent of the dying sailor poem ‘water water everywhere (and not a drop to drink)’ as what we need to survive and risk dying through scarcity surrounds us and kills us instead. And even The Doctor can’t stop it, because water is inside us all and even a drop of contamination, back on Earth, could spell disaster. Most of the story is then about the tug-of-war between the base looking on the bright side (usually a good thing in Dr Who stories which means they’ll live) and The Doctor who knows they can’t ever risk going home and that the base, the symbol of humanity’s pluck and courage, has to be destroyed.  


A lot of Russell’s final scripts for the series from the ‘first time round’ deal with how we won’t always have a good-heart(s)ed Dr around to ‘save’ us and we have to learn to save ourselves (‘Midnight’ and ‘Turn Left’ especially), while also dealing with how the 10th Doctor, who used to be charming and charismatic, has slowly become so smug and sure of himself. Note how he bosses Adelaide Brooks around like she’s Rose, even though she knows the Mars terrain so much better than him and he’s a stranger that’s already told us at home how in awe of her she is. However even though she’s blonde Adelaide isn’t throwing herself at The Doctor or becomes in awe of him: she’s seen enough of the universe already not to be impressed and while she does save him, in one last heartless gesture (a clever idea having the Flood be in water the base has already drunk so he isn’t affected. Good job he don't arrive in time for tea really!) Ford’s original script ended with Mia and Yuki going on to have a baby who would head into space and who wouldn’t have survived if The Doctor hadn’t rescued the two of them, but it felt wrong to Russell, too easy. So instead the showrunner re-wrote it, having the rescue mission end up causing more harm than good. The Doctor saves her, Yuri and Mia and gloats about expecting their thanks but they’re more terrified of him than The Flood and refuse to let him have a victory he doesn’t deserve. The Doctor thought for a glorious five minutes there he could do anything and was bigger than the laws of time itself, but the brilliance of Dr Who is that our lead is no superhero, just someone who means well and occasionally gets it wrong. He’s badly punished for his arrogance here in a story where he ‘loses’ more thoroughly than any story that doesn’t include a regeneration, albeit neatly setting things up for a finale when exactly that occurs (it’s very like ‘Planet Of The Spiders’ in fact, the final karmic Pertwee story that punishes The Doctor for his recklessness and curiosity that so often puts the people around him in danger. That story’s writer and executive producer Barry Letts, who did so much to shaped what we think of ‘as’ Dr Who, died five weeks before transmission and ‘Waters Of Mars’ carries a sweet caption to him). 


But is this really about The Doctor? Across the fourth season, especially, he’s become the mouth-piece for his creator, sharing all his same traits: personable, friendly, a chatterbox bordering on being a know it all. Not since Malcolm Hulke and Robert Holmes had a writer been quite so involved with making ‘their’ Doctor a direct (if exaggerated) version of them and no other Dr Who writer outside Terrance Dicks’ 3rd Doctor (whom he never wrote for directly) has become quite so linked to a particular regeneration as he is to the 10th. We’ve seen it in other stories like ‘Midnight’ where The Doctor’s need to be the most important person in the room has worked against him and it’s a theme that keeps cropping up at this end stage of Russell’s time as showrunner. Had Mary Whitehouse still been alive and still been watching the series she’d have had apoplexy at the sight of the possessed humans, all their humanity gone, replaced by a rictus grin like The Joker from Batman, while the possessed Humans drip their way across Mars (we’re used to people on bases under siege being big drips in the 2nd Dr era, but never quite like this).It might be significant that this is one of the first scripts written now that Russell has made the painful decision to hand over control of his beloved show to his friend Steven Moffat, a writer who’d been applauded for his particularly scary scripts over the past few years. Russell, like most of us, assumed that Moffat would probably deliver more of the same once he took over for good and may have had half an eye on writing a properly scary story of his own for the Dr Who history-books, to get in there first (and to make a plausible aesthetic link between their two often very different styles (there’s one point, where Adelaide is discussing the water supplies, you’re convinced she’s going to say ‘Don’t even drink, drink and you’re dead, just like in ‘Blink’! Mind you, it goes both ways: Moffat’s ‘The Pilot’, about a sentient puddle of water, returns the compliment by stealing heavily from this story). It’s also worth noting that there are far more links to Moffat’s stories in the RTD2 years than anything from his own era). As things turn out Moffat will go in a much dreamier, more fairytale direction a world away from the harsh realities of this script which makes it redundant on that score, but Russell wouldn’t have known that: the only clue Moffat was giving anyone was River Song turning up a few episodes early in ‘Silence In The Library/Forest Of The Dead’ and even Moffat wasn’t sure if she was ever actually coming back (till her popularity meant he couldn’t really avoid it).


I suspect this story also reflects Russell’s sadness at fate getting in the way just as he was at the peak of his powers so that he couldn’t give the show he loved his full attention anymore. For all the stories from the second half of series four were written against the backdrop of Russell’s partner Adam getting seriously sick, while Davies wrestles with the difficult decision of whether to stay with his dream job or stay home to look after him full time. It must have felt as if fate was laughing at him: there he is, having brought back his favourite show back from the dead and after four years of hard work Dr Who is now at the point where the BBC treat it as a flagship programme that will do no wrong, where he can win any award and write anything he likes (a dream job for any writer). Just look at the moment when The Doctor is crushed by meeting Mia especially. ‘You’re so young’ he sighs, his eyes saying ‘it isn’t fair’. Russell has been flattered by everyone from all sides for years now, from fandom to critics, and even to someone as rooted as he tried to be that has to have an effect on you at some point, where you start to believe at least some of your own publicity. But of course as brilliant as Dr Who is, as important and profound as the points it raises are and as much influence as it has, it’s still only a TV programme. It can’t reverse cancer or heal people that are sick (see ‘New Earth’ for the last script Russell finished before the diagnosis, when The Doctor does just that). For all the things he can do with a fictional character in a fictional universe there’s one thing he can’t change: fate in real life. And so Russell gets ‘his’ Doctor to say everything he wants to say to the fates in this portion of his life: basically ‘how dare you do this to me just at my moment of greatest triumph!’ A lot of his final scripts from ‘Midnight’ onwards have Russell angrily shouting at the world for doing this to him right now when he’s happy (it’s not for nothing that the 10th Doctor is the one who screams ‘I don’t want to go”’ because his writer really really really didn’t, but equally would never have forgiven himself if he’d wasted those last few precious years with his soulmate by always being at work).


Note how the monster in this story takes over just when the base is settled and everyone’s comfortable, thinking their hard work is all done and dusted and how it strikes without warning: anyone who’s ever dealt with sickness for themselves or family know the primal guttural misery of realising that as much as you like to think you’re in control of your life and have it together you’re only one sudden unannounced crisis away from having your world turned upside-down. This story is all about how the Doctor continues to stay in his ‘job’ saving people long past the point when he knows it’s wrong, that everything is telling him to get out now, that this is a fixed point in time he has to obey, but he can’t stop himself because he’s the Doctor and saving people is what he does. He refuses to let people die, which can be read in two ways: why Russell absolutely has to quit now and care for his loved one and also because he can’t cheat the laws of time. He’s had his time, it was fun, but now he has to go or the timelines will be forever changed and he’ll forever be guilty. So we get that wonderfully charged ending when The Doctor has to see and hear the sight of death all around, desperately trying to stick to his convictions, but he just can’t stop himself. So he comes back for one last rescue. And it all goes horribly wrong. Sometimes there are things even The Doctor can’t solve. And it’s so courageous a thing to do, at a time when The Doctor was everybody’s hero, tripped up on his own arrogance and ego right at the time of his greatest triumph. Though not intended as such, this is the end of an arc Russell has been writing since ‘Boom Town’, about repercussions of behaviours and how, unlike the classic series, even The Doctor has to pay his bar tab sometimes in the modern series, facing up to all the things he gets wrong.  
Note how this base is the ‘first’, the pioneers who took a dying planet and breathed new life into it, in just the way Russell did to Dr Who. Note how the alien arrives just when it looks as if everything is settled, waiting when they let their guard down rather than attacking on first arrival. Note too that the first pioneers are doomed and have to make way for those who come afterwards because that is the nature of exploration: it comes with risk and people who know they might never come out of it alive. This event is a ‘fixed point’ in time because Adelaide Brooks’ death needs to happen to inspire the people who come after her and really do lead mankind out into space to become the ‘indomitable plague’ the 4th Dr mentions in ‘The Ark In Space’. Equally Russell has to give up the job he loves sometime in order to make way for the people behind him, so they can spread their wings and have their say, even when he doesn’t want to, perhaps thinking of those who were little during the time of transmission who would grow up to be the fans and writers of the future steering the ship the way Russell was a kid during the days of the 3rd and 4th Drs (he was almost exactly six months old the day the first episode went out in November 1963). In his heart he knows it’s the right thing to do. But like The Doctor he can’t bear to leave. The 10th Dr, his doppelganger, is too arrogant to see clearly, blinded by his desperation that things will work out if he just keeps going – in the end his characters are smarter than he is and Adelaide Brooks (spoilers) takes her own life to set time straight anyway, putting things back on their natural course again, the one thing The Doctor can’t control – saving someone who can’t be saved, who shouldn’t be saved  (and writers, after all, more than anybody are used to having control over what happens; we’re all control freaks at heart, with power over worlds we create). The Doctor thinks he’s being his most human and caring. Even the people who trusted him see him as a monster. He even starts quoting from The Master in ‘The Time Monster’ that ‘the laws of time are mine and you will obey me!’ All that absolute power has gone to his head an corrupted him, absolutely, even though we know what the abse doesn’t, that his intentions were always good.


Russell’s best scripts all come from this late run when he digs deep inside himself and faces up to a shadow side most writers would simply ignore. A lot of Russell’s best scripts are about everyone learning lessons dressed up as a different kind of action story, but none perhaps quite as brilliant as this, a deeply brave story that takes one hell of a lot of risks in an effort to be Russell’s penultimate will and testament, about a lesson he himself learned the hard way about making stable plans in a changing universe. By and large in Russell’s scripts he ‘saves’ the people who are good and kills off the people who are bad, but sometimes being good isn’t enough. Russell is clearly from the Barry Letts Buddhist school of Dr Who ands the writer/director/producer would surely have adored this story, which is almost a Buddhist parable about ‘living in the moment’ not the future and what goes wrong when your ego grows out of control. Even more eerie, it’s a tale about the dangers of exploration with lots of throwbacks to polar exploration (which is where ‘The Tenth Planet’, set at the South Pole, got the idea too), where plucky Humans (usually Brits) are no match for the power and whims of nature. Funnily enough back when he was an actor Barry’s biggest role was as Apsley Cherry-Garrard in the film ‘Scott Of The Antarctic’, a ‘doomed heroes’ tale from real life that feels as if it served as a model for this one inspiring future explorers with tales of bravery and sacrifice (Who writer Mark Gatiss played the exact same role in the remake, weirdly). Adelaide is clearly Captain Scott, stoic and a gentleman (well, a lady) to the end, with strict protocols and a stickler for rules who still understands her crew’s need to goof off occasionally and the importance of a happy ship. Lindsay Duncan plays Adelaide in exactly that way (her next big job is playing Matt Smith’s mum in his last pre-Who job ‘Christopher and His Kind’ funnily enough, where the 11th Doctor is oddly miscast as playwright Christopher Isherwood In a so-so movie), while the noble sacrifice of Roman (yes, even the comic relief dies in this story!) recalls Captain Oates sacrificing himself in the knowledge he’ll slow down the party. After all, what could be more ‘cut off from civilisation’ than being at the end of the world? Except in Dr Who terms, where it’s the end of an empty world. There are no sofas to hide behind here, just mankind, his and her wits and the elements.


Russell’s greatest strength as a writer is his ability to make even his smallest, most minor character seem like a real flesh and blood person we can relate to – had he killed a majority of them off along the way we’d never have been able to sleep at night. IBut here he has a jolly good go with a full ten minutes of the Dr looking sad and wordlessly walking away while all hell breaks loose behind him, everyone willing him to turn round even while he knows he has to go (this might be Russell’s one bit of ego, as fans wondered out loud if the show could even last without him and all hell broke loose on social media). Phil Ford deserves full credit too and a lot of the character touches we associate with Russell may well be his judging by his emotional-wringer episodes of Sarah Jane and Torchwood.  I suspect Russell let his co-writer come up with a lot of the ‘everyday base scenes’ which last just long enough for us to get a feel of both what a hard life this would be if mankind went into space (Ford’s other co-credit, for ‘Into The Dalek’, features a lot of excellent scene-building like this) before Russell takes over for the last quarter. A lot of this story stems from the fact that he’s alone: without Donna there to stop him he always goes a bit too far post-Rose and even when he tries to do what she would do (save people, like in ‘Fires Of Pompeii’) he gets it ‘wrong’ by going too far to the other extreme. It’s certainly not the heartwarming ending fans would have been expecting at all in his era of the show (or what Phil Ford’s name in the credits or the teased bits about princesses would have suggested). However ‘Waters Of Mars’ is all the better for it, a story that’s unique in Who terms in being scary both in the monster staring right at us (the moment Maggie’s voice changes mid-sentence, as she stares at a picture of the Earth and all its water, might well be the single scariest moment of the modern series) and the psychological horror that nature just doesn’t care about mankind. Now this would have been even more of a downer had it been on at Christmas as originally intended – that’s why the carrots are being grown for Christmas and why the only bird taken from Earth is a robin, judging by the birdsong - before it was moved to being a ‘Thanksgiving Special’ in America (which is just wrong given that it features killer vegetables). They really should have made it Who’s first ‘Halloween’ special though: it has that feel about it, when nasty sinister lurking things we try to pretend aren’t there come out to play. The makeup job, the dripping water, the scene of it breaking into the base rivet by rivet, the sheer unstoppable relentlessness of water all make The Flood one of the best Dr Who threats and one I’m amazed hasn’t had a re-match yet (only in the comic strips anyway – see below).


Is ‘Waters Of Mars’ perfect? Well, it’s maybe a tad too sophisticated to be a true horror story like the hammer horror ones of the 1970s. It is perhaps a bit dark for children: they have to be careful about not actually saying Adelaide commits suicide due to BBC guidelines and she uses an audibly futuristic gun to do it (one The Doctor couldn’t possibly have heard from outside the way he does); the more child-friendly animation ‘Dreamland’ was broadcast very soon afterwards but actually a lot of children preferred this, for all its dark edges. There’s only the one plot, which ebbs and flows until it hits a powerful climax which does make it all a bit intense. The scene of a young Adelaide and a Dalek sparing her life, told in flashback (as part of ‘The Stolen Earth/Journey’s End’) doesn’t quite work (what does a Dalek care about a fixed point in humanity’s time? They’re not timelords with a rulebook and would be more likely to kill her if she helped inspire mankind to stretch out to the stars). Given how curious The Doctor seems to be about what happened at this base it’s curious he’s never been for a peek, nor that he turns up expecting to find a base over-run with trouble given it seems unlikely mankind will ever build a second one on Mars after this. For once the jokes don’t fit: you’d hope that mankind would have come up with a better robot than ‘Gadget’ during the next fifty years and it feels out of place (even while giving him a plausible finale when The Doctor uses Gadget to control the Tardis and land it in the base). Gadget, based on Pixar’s greatest film Wall-E, is too ricketty to survive on Mars (in real life takes had to be halted as its arms kept falling off and the robot kept running over them and breaking them!) and too much of a liability given its bulk and inability to be repaired given that there are no set jobs for it to do and – apparently – one crew member who knows how to control it. The Doctor’s oddly grumpy about it too, as if resentful on an unfeeling robot’s behalf (is he remembering ‘Robot’ or ‘Robots Of Death’?) despite having never shown an aversion to silly robots before – indeed, a man who owned a robot shaped like a dog for three seasons can’t really complain about one being dressed up (however much he protests about that being ‘different’). Meanwhile the Dr’s in an uncharacteristically breezy and light-hearted mood when he first lands at the base, almost as if the script is being balanced out for the horrors to come, a man dressed for a party who hasn’t realised it’s really a wake. It’s a slight shame: had this story been dark all the way through it might have tasted even more brilliantly bitter rather than being an uncomfortable halfway house (just as dark chocolate never tastes right when in the middle of white or milk) and perhaps had this base only just become habitable after months of hard work rather than a second cosy home already. There’s nother truly awful blubbing Murray Gold choir tacked onto the end, on what has otherwise been a story that’s been impressively open and scoreless, allowing the viewer to think what they want to think. The story is set up maybe a little quickly and takes too long to end (the final edit was at sixty-five minutes for ages until a lot of the start got trimmed. Personally they should have taken out a bit more of the end). It relies a lot on the people at home understanding the idea of karma and the laws of time and why The Doctor can’t save everyone. I know a lot of fans who were left confused by the ending and it isn’t quite as neat as Russell makes it out to be (for the mystery of Adelaide dying at home rather on Mars and the possible disgrace of her suicide might well change how her children and grandchildren see the future as explorers. Not least because she didn’t call round to them to say goodbye first).


Yet ‘Waters’ still works and packs a really powerful punch, one of the unsung greats of the comeback era that got a bit lost compared to the ghastly and great stories either side of it. This is a story that could easily have gone wrong and would have fallen apart badly had the wrong people been cast and hammed up what could have been very silly monsters or missed the wry humour of Humans always missing the bigger picture (such as the scene where Andy is the first Human converted, at the back of shot, in glorious mime, while Maggie rambles on about home stuff). But one of the reasons ‘Waters Of Mars’ is so powerful is that every single part is perfectly suited to the actor playing them, who all manage to make people we only know for an hour (and sometimes only a few minutes) feel three-dimensional flesh and blood. They all get families, or talk about not having families and mention other stuff beside their job (something other writers never quite get right). This one of the best overall casts in the series, an ensemble piece where every part is judged to perfection. Lindsay Duncan (who had never watched Dr Who but had always wanted to work with David Tennant, a last minute replacement after Helen Mirren ummed and ahhed) is note-perfect as Captain Brooks, tough enough to make all the hard decisions but vulnerable enough to make her moments of doubt and panic seem like a part of her character rather than a contradiction. The smaller characters don’t get much to do but still do what they can very well – none more so than break-out star Gemma Chan as Mia, the innocent and vulnerable one you can all but guarantee would survive in any other Dr Who script (she’ll end up another of Dr Who’s unknowns who became breakout stars, becoming a hit with another BBC scifi show ‘Humans’ in 2015, alongside Colin Morgan from ‘Midnight’). Most of the others are Russell regulars from his other series like ‘Queer As Folk’ or Cucumber’, which might explain why he wrote for them as well as he did.  


As for the base itself, the show also features some of Dr Who’s most convincing location shooting (another real strength of the Davies era) with Carmarthenshire's Botanical Gardens making a highly suitable double for a base filled with plants. I like to think that even now the people who work there are nervously looking over their shoulder for signs of ‘The Flood’ in their colleagues given the realism of this story! Even after events switch to the studio things look more impressive than normal, mostly thanks to the extra space the production team had after Torchwood’s main hub had been destroyed in their third Russell-written series ‘Children Of Earth’ and so didn’t need to be kept on standby for filming anymore. It looks as big and spacious and believable as any set in Dr Who and matches up well with the ‘pentagram’ shaped modelwork too (rarer than you’d think). There’s one of the best uses of a quarry in the entire series, too, with the shot of the Tardis arriving on red stone that really does look an awful lot like the red planet (Taffs Well Quarry, Morganstown). Russell sent Tennant a message on the morning of filming ‘Hooray! Your last quarry!’ Then sheepishly sent an apology message a few days later that he’d just written one into the finale ‘The End Of Time’! Then there’s Russell’s favourite location, Victoria Place in Newport, the street where Adelaide lives and back in Dr Who again for it’s last of umpteen appearances as different things, complete with snow (a hangover from the Christmas setting that nobody wanted to  change). This is a story with lots of space and scale compared to every other Dr Who ‘base under siege’ stories, yet remains claustrophobic throughout too, directed with intelligence by Graeme Harper in his last Dr Who before retirement (the series’ longest serving director, he’s been around since ‘Warrior’s Gate’ in 1981).


For the most part ‘Waters Of Mars’ is a masterpiece, as brave as Russell’s other brilliant ‘farewell’ scripts like ‘Midnight’ and ‘The End Of Time’ (and pipped only by ‘Turn Left’, a last love song to DW from one of its biggest fans), a tale much much darker and groundbreaking than it needed to be as its showrunner pushed DW into another giant leap even as he was taking his last small steps with the show (or so we all thought at the time anyway). As great as the overall tale is, this is a story made up lots of little nuggets of greatness, from the slow Flood takeovers to the casual dialogue (‘State your name, rank and intention’ ‘I’m The Doctor, Doctor, Fun’ and the joke that Richard Branson’s company are still talking about going to Mars but haven’t quite made it yet even half a century on from transmission) to the tough bits (The Doctor pleads to be allowed to go and answer simply ‘Adelaide Brooks’ when asked how, to which she does it with the words ‘damn you!’, knowing she dies while he gets to walk free) to the astonishing long shot as The Doctor tries to keep out of trouble but just can’t stop himself, the sound and sights of death ringing in his eyes and seen through his tears. Shadowy, sinister, scary, almost brutally real and utterly unlike anything else Dr Who had ever tried in its long history, this is one hell of a way to (nearly) bow out, as perfect a piece of telly as any you’d see in the 2010s. The tragedy is that Russell’s time on the show he loves evaporating right at the point when his brain was being flooded with some of his best ideas, but of course it’s the situation he was in that was inspiring them. And that the economic climate kept shrinking them just as his ideas were getting more ambitious: it was touch and go whether this special would be made at all and the cast, crew and showrunner all went through hell making it. Unlike some other Dr Who stories where that happened backstage, it never shows onscreen: indeed it’s the confidence in ‘Waters’, that the audience can actually cope with something as relentlessly dark as this, which impresses most. ‘Waters’ is still the only Dr Who story Russell won a HUGO award for (he was usually beaten by Moffat!) and deservedly so, even if this story hasn’t lasted as long in the public consciousness as some others. Phil Ford deserved a longer and more illustrious career on the main show too. Though in many ways it’s an ending, ‘Waters Of Mars’ feels like a new beginning, a whole new darker way of doing the show. For ‘Waters Of Mars’ is sparkling with ideas everywhere you look.


POSITIVES + Once again one of his final scripts asks a lot from David Tennant and he’s utterly superb, digging out a new darker side to his Doctor all the more impressive for coming so soon after the start of an episode where he’s his light and breezy self (for the last time, give or take his appearance in the Sarah Jane Adventures filmed after this story but screened a fortnight before it). Few other actors (maybe Hartnell or Troughton?) could have carried off the scenes where the Doctor stands in front of the camera trying hard not to cry or re-act to every last thud going on behind him as the base is destroyed, Tennant’s face saying everything without saying a word. I know there’s been a bit of a backlash for this era nowadays and for some of it, particularly what was going on behind the scenes and Martha’s character arc, that backlash is warranted. But never David Tennant’s performance who’s always reliably brilliant even in lesser scripts and utterly superb in his best ones like here that ask him to show off one of the widest ranges of any actor in any series. Your heart utterly breaks when the Doctor’s does and the charges of smugness and ego that people often criticise this particular regeneration become his downfall here, a character flaw that drives the plot. This is a timelord who starts the story a King and ends it a broken little boy. What other series ever does that to their leading character heroes? What other actor playing an action hero could even try to pull that off?!?


NEGATIVES - Whatever happened to The Ice Warriors, our resident Dr Who Martians? There’s a line that glibly tries to cover this in dialogue, that they discovered The Flood long ago and buried it, but you have the sneaking suspicion that even as big a fan as Russell T (working with a production team full of other fans) simply ‘forgot’ that another alien race had already laid claim to our nearest neighbour. Because where are they? A cut scene has them fleeing the planet rather than let The Flood win, but that’s highly out of character and contradicts all continuity, while surely there’d be some sign of their civilisation if they left in a hurry. It seems uncharacteristic that the Ice Warriors would ever let a species they trust as little as humanity build on their soil and even less likely that they’d let an invisible entity run amok without having a big ol’ battle with it out of honour and duty etc. The script could have made quite a play on this too: after all the Ice warriors are reptiles so presumably have their own source of water somewhere, perhaps one ‘programmed’ to kill any interlopers like those pesky noisy humans that live next door? Or, as we’re in a crossover into the kinder more community-savvy ‘Peladon’ lot they could have left a message saying ‘We’re just on holiday at the moment conquering another star system, make yourself at home but don’t touch anything OK?’ and a coda where they go ‘typical humans, they can’t leave anything alone, I knew we shouldn’t have let them and their opposable thumbs come to visit. I suppose they’ve de-tuned our telly to some awful earth reality TV station, tuned up the thermostat and drunk all the alcohol out the fridge too’.


BEST QUOTE:Water is patient, Adelaide. Water just waits. Wears down the clifftops. The mountains. The whole of the world. Water always wins’.


PREQUELS/SEQUELS: So, no Ice Warriors then, despite the story being set on Mars: ya boo! So hurrah for ‘The Wolves Of Winter’ (2017), a 12th Doctor comic strip - one of the last to feature the Capaldi Doctor in fact, published in the gap between ‘The Doctor Falls’ and ‘Twice Upon A Time’ and a story that’s already been mentioned under both ‘The Curse Of Fenric’ and ‘The Eaters Of Light’. The script takes in 9th century Vikings, a crashed spaceship and The Ice Warrior community massacred by…The Flood. Good job The Doctor and Bill are there to put things right…eventually! (Though it’s a surprise the 12th Doctor doesn’t give his younger self a hint to leave well alone somewhere given that chronologically this is a prequel to‘Waters Of Mars’). See the prequels/section under ‘Empress Of Mars’ for more.


I read the online short story, I read the novel, I read the comics, I watched the webcasts, I got a couple of the Big Finish downloads as Christmas presents (thanks Thomas!)– admittedly I didn’t get to the interactive event ‘Time Fracture’ but even so you would have thought by the end of that lot I’d have a better idea of what the ‘Timelord Victorious’ series (2020-present) was meant to be. In total there were sixty-six separate items in the ‘Victorious' series, ranging from short half page items to full-on epic stories. Some of them are quite good, despite being given short shrift from a confused community who saw it as a bit of a cheat to be honest, a way to make money off the Who name during what seemed like an impossibly long gap between Chibnall and RTD2 eras. The central premise: the 10th Doctor goes a bit mad post-‘Waters’ and ends up creating a parallel world where he thinks he’s unstoppable and can do whatever the hell he wants (hint: he can’t). You could, if you wanted to, read/watch/listen to the stories in order and get an overall picture of The Doctor’s gradual descent into a sort of Master Mark II. Or you could take each story as a standalone event. It was quite the challenge: kudos to James Goss, overall executive producer, who somehow managed to liaise between multiple companies such as Dr Who magazine, Big Finish, Penguin Books, Titan Comics, Eaglemoss models, the online Dr Who comic creator and the BBC itself, not to mention the producers of the interactive event and the Dr Who ‘escape room’. In purely negotiating terms it’s by far the most ambitious thing the series ever did. In practice it’s all a bit bitty, with different authors never quite sure whether they’re writing for basically The Doctor as we know him or a Valeyard-style darker timelord, the result being a bit of a jumble. It doesn’t help, either, that we basically get the same plot as ‘Waters’ with The Doctor shocked to find he doesn’t have the powers he thinks he does, but without the benefit of the shock value of the episode where he discovers it for the first time (and it’s hard to think that the shocked Doctor at the end of this story would ever dare try anything like it again). Most of the stories feature the 10th Doctor but the 8th and 9th cameo quite a lot (the ripples of The Doctor’s actions going back to the time war) and one story – the best one – even features the 4th (Big Finish audio ‘Genetics Of The Daleks’ in which The Doctor intervenes to save an ‘Ark In Space’
-like starship from destruction). They’re still making the flipping things now though most fans I know stopped being interested in it a long time ago – maybe one day we’ll get a final end? Till then it all seems a bit pointless, despite some good stories along the way. Oh and a shout out to Brian the Ood, the most memorable ‘new’ character, who turned up in the comic creator story and is a very good Ood indeed.  


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