Silver Nemesis
(Season 25, Dr 7 with Ace, 23/11/1988-7/12/1988, producer: John Nathan-Turner, script editor: Andrew Cartmel, writer: Kevin Clarke, director: Chris Clough)
Rank: 168
'Hey man, dig these crazy beats! We've just been hired as the new companions so we can play our trumpets at any aliens we meet because the whole universe needs jazz. Why only today we conquered the Krotons with Coltrane, Jelly Roll Mortoned the Abzorbaloff, Benny Goodmanned the Cyberman into submission and then after we hung out with some cool cats at New New New New York. There was a worrying moment when The Meddling Monk turned out to be disguised as Thelonious Monk, but we defeated him too by taking away his piano-shaped Tardis and turning it into a xylophone. Now the universe is all grooved out and our work here is done' - Miles T Davis and Chet 'Tom Or Is It Colin?' Baker
Doctor Who’s 25th anniversary was an oddly muted affair compared to the big guns that were pulled out for the 10th and 20th anniversaries. John Nathan-Turner, always a producer for every publicity going, tried to interest the BBC in a one-off special (with a one-off fund to go with it) but was turned down flat. The Radio Times sent a photographer round but figured the world needed to see more of an unconvincing rat puppet and a lion with crazy eyes instead (it was week two of the first series of ‘The Chronicles of Narnia’ – sadly not the one with Tom Baker as a Marshwiggle. I blame Michael ‘scifi isn’t popular if I put it up against Coronation Street and stick my fingers in my ears and go la la la really loudly’ Grade). The BBC trailer decided to play up the anniversary with a big flashy trail which stressed the long-running status of the series by…showing some clips from ‘The Web Planet’, a story even fans admit looks a bit silly (that settles it: it just has to be sabotage). Even behind the scenes the all-important story was handed over not to a big name or a hero of fandom but someone who, by his own admission, had only ever seen a couple of episodes of Dr Who (and hadn’t thought much of those). In fact Kevin Clarke didn’t even know Dr Who was still on the air when he met a mutual friend named Caroline Alton on a BBC writer’s course who said that script editor Andrew Cartmel was in search of promising new writers and he’d ended up with the anniversary story by default because all the other slots were filled. Even then Clarke originally wrote this story for the Daleks, until Cartmel sheepishly pointed out they already had one of those this season (‘Remembrance’). Clarke had never heard of the Cybermen until JNT suggested the silver giants as a pun on the ‘silver anniversary’ (oh ho ho, how we laughed. For about three seconds). The all-important anniversary date meant this story had to go out when it did even when the BBC messed with the schedules so ‘Nemesis’ ended up not even being the all-important season opener but shunted to slot three out of four. Overshadowed by the ghosts of better Dr Who stories past (‘Remembrance’ set where it all began in 1963), present (‘The Happiness Patrol’ might be about an lien planet in the future but it’s really about Thatcherist Britain in the present) and future (the meta ‘Greatest Show In The Galaxy’, about how the series will wind up if it continues along its current path) there just isn’t a niche for ‘Silver Nemesis’ to slot into, no real reason to exist. Everything it has to say has been said before, better.
But it’s an anniversary
story right? So everybody party! Except even the making of this story was a
struggle. As with jazz, timing in Dr Who is everything and ‘Silver Nemesis’ is
one of those stories that was just unlucky at every turn. Clarke, still new to
television and Cartmel, still fairly new to script editing, kept hitting
problems, signing off reluctantly on draft ‘sixty-four’ of this story to
Clarke’s memory (although writers do have a tendency to exaggerate!) because they’d run out of time. The discovery
of asbestos at the BBC meant that ‘Greatest Show In The Galaxy’ was running
late, with everyone tired after spending weeks in a tent in the BBC car park,
with Sylvester McCoy and Sophie Aldred too busy filming that story to attend
rehearsals for this one, so instead of the usual welcoming atmosphere the
supporting cast mostly rubbed shoulders with each other and didn’t really find
a lot in common to enjoy (or, in Anton Diffring’s case, anything to enjoy: he rubbished the
script every chance he got and admitted that he only took the part to do some
paid filming in England while the Wimbledon tennis championships were on: he
couldn’t get coverage where he lived in France). Throw in delays in the
pre-planning stage (it was Windsor Castle’s turn to mess the BBC around,
finally deciding that it would be ‘undignified to let a fictional story be
filmed on their grounds and figuring Prince Edward had ‘better things to do’
than cameo in the story) and delays in the filming stage (guest star Dolores
Grey accidentally left her wig behind and on the last day, when everyone was
behind already, it rained buckets, leading to a last minute switch of scenes
and a lot of very drenched actors. The crew took to calling it ‘Black Friday’)
and you can see why not many people remember this story too fondly. ‘Silver
Nemesis’ is the nemesis of this late period of the ‘classic’ show which showed
up all the ways that the show was under-funded, under-loved and misunderstood.
But, separated of the
problems making it and the giant strides Dr Who was making in the rest of one
of their better seasons, it’s really not that bad, a story that’s unlucky more
than anything else. Being fresh to the series means that Clarke has an entirely
different view to the series than most people and he makes connections that
fans of the series would never have made, all of which make sense. Clarke’ big
passion in life is music and he sees all these characters through different
genres. The Doctor reveals to Ace that he’s a jazz fanatic and by chance she’s
one too – which seems unlikely given what we know of both of them but also sort
of fits; Clarke’s handle on The Doctor being a time traveller is that he sees
time in a different way to other people: he plays loose with time but with the
faith that he’ll somehow hit all the ‘beats’ right on the time they’re needed,
which is indeed The Doctor to a tee. Ace, too, doesn’t play by the rulebook so
while it seems odd at first that a hip young teenager from a poverty-stricken
part of London in the 1980s should be a jazz freak, we also know that Ace would
delight in loving something so perverse and unfashionable (and mocking all her
peers into 1980s empty synth pop to boot). Clarke, who got to know the Cybermen
on a crash course of videos and old scripts Cartel sent him in the post (he
liked the black-and-white ones best), equated them with being the opposite of
jazz, rigid thinkers who marched to the same beat and had stopped thinking for
themselves, which is a pretty good summation to their character. Clarke also
threw in two groups of incidental characters in musical terms. De Flores and
his troops of ‘German-speaking paramilitaries’ (the BBC is still a bit edgy
about saying ‘Nazis’ but everyone knows who they mean) are music’ equivalent to
the Cybermen, Wagner, grandiose and racist, spouting Third Reich spiel about
the Cybermen as ‘Gods’ and themselves as ‘supermen’ (nobody seems to have had
the heart to tell Clarke that Dr Who already had a race of Nazis in The
Daleks). Lady Peinforte and her servant Richard, meanwhile, come from the 17th
century and are an interesting case: to us they represent old worlde
Renaissance music, with hints of a nostalgia that never was, but that’s only
because we’ve forgotten theirs was ‘battle’ music, designed to be played in the
enemy’s face while they died a brutal death. Only The Doctor really ‘gets’ the
music, meaning he’s the only person who really gets ‘life’: he’s playing cool,
daddy-O, while everyone else is stuck playing the same tune over and over. As a
fully paid up musicophile myself I love this new way of seeing the Whoniverse.
I just wish Clarke was
writing for a different Doctor. You see, Clarke wasn’t enough of a fan to keep
abreast of where Cartmel wanted to take the show and I suspect a majority of
drafts were Cartmel (one of the kinder, more empathetic script editors) trying
to find a middle ground between keeping Clarke’s individual writing style and
his own visions for the series. To Cartmel the Doctor is ‘more than just a
timelord’ and never more than here, a scheming ruthless regeneration that lures
the Cybermen into a trap with the Validium, a sort of ‘magic bow’ that’s
related to a comet he himself sent into orbit round Earth, and sees the Humans
who come along for their own evil ends as fair game as casualties go. As much
as he pretends to Ace that he’s a jazz fan who likes to play things cool (and
as well as that sums up the 4th Doctor in perfectly) he’s not that
man anymore. In this generation at least he’s Bach, someone treating music,
someone treating life, like a mathematics puzzle that has to be won at all
costs. Clarke took to this idea when it was pointed out to him to a degree,
taking part in what of the oddest writer’s meetings in Dr Who history where he
announced to the script editor and producer that he wanted to make the Doctor
mysterious again, offering his theory that he was ‘God’, walking amongst us and
‘saving our souls’ with the occasional sacrifice for our benefit (JNT looked
panicked and got Clarke to promise that even if he wrote The Doctor like that
he would never actually hint to that on screen; Cartmel admitted he’d been
secretly thinking along similar lines). That’s
the problem with ‘Silver Nemesis’ as I see it: the Doctor defeats The Cybermen
with freeform jazz, blocking their cyber-signals with music they could never
ever understand – and because he’s set a trap for them that’s been years,
centuries, perhaps multiple regenerations in the making (he admits to
‘forgetting’ he’d set u this trap, suggesting it’s another Doctor who did it
but he could be lying; at a push the 2nd Doctor - the closest to the
7th - might have had a bash and Lady Peinforte mentions him being
‘small’ last time she met him, but you’d have thought Dr 2 would have written
his future self notes in his 500 year diary). The two sides of this Doctor
don’t belong in this same story. They try to cover it up with The Doctor’s
comment he likes ‘straight blowing’ best (a nonsense made up phrase by the way,
suggesting it’s a style from the future: there is such a thing as ‘straight
ahead jazz’ though which started roughly when Dr Who did, a softer more
acoustic style of jazz in retaliation to the growing 1960s trend of crossing
over with rock and roll. But we all know the Doctor is rock and roll all
through anyway, defying rules and authority and expressing freedom, not least
because we’re only a year after ‘Delta and The
Bannermen’. Which might be where Clarke got his ‘jazz’ idea in the first
place). Having The Doctor be evil by trapping no less than three groups of
people for effectively ‘being evil’ also makes him the biggest hypocrite since The
Queen turned down a cameo on the grounds that she was ‘too busy’ (ditto Prince
Edward; I wonder if she ever regretted that after she became a fan of the
comeback, reportedly showing the family the series one box set when they came
round for Christmas in 2005. Which if nothing explains the rather odd and out
of character arrival of Queen Elizabeth X in ‘The
Beast Below’ ). ‘Stay cool’ says the jazz and the opening and closing
scenes. ‘Kill, kill, kill’ says everything in between, from the Cybermen and
Nazis down to the Doctor himself.
On a similar ‘note’ Clarke
has more problems than most writers trying to juggle the two very different
sides of Dr Who. On the one hand it’s a deeply serious series about real-life
problems designed to make you think and question your mortality and the state
of the universe and humanity’s place in it; on another level it’s a series made
for a family audience with children on a Saturday teatime before the watershed,
with a section of the fanbase who tune in for fun. Clarke tries desperately to
write for both, but he pitches some of the story as so hard and brutal (a
Cyber-Nazi battle should be the most ruthless fight we’ve seen in the entire
series, with no quarter given) and some as too light and fluffy (there are no
less than three unfunny comedy moments across the story: the typical 1980s
skinhead racists who think Lady Peinforte and her servant must be ‘social
workers’ because they’re weirdly dressed and a bit posh little knowing they’re
more evil and cruel than they could ever be; guest star Dolores Grey giving
Lady Penforte a lift and misunderstanding everything they say, played as if
it’s the funniest thing ever seen on TV even though it might just be the most
cringeworthy scene in all of Dr Who; and The Queen – no not the real one, but a
lookalike who seems less like Liz II than I do – walking her corgis while The
Doctor fails to recognise her). They don’t belong in the same story, which
means that the cyber-Nazi battle, the meeting of two of the most evil species
in the universe, comes across as silly after what we’ve just seen, while we’re
too shocked from the ramifications of this story to find any of the jokes
funny, even if they were hilarious (which they very much aren’t).
Then there’s the main
story itself, which (like the worst of jazz) is so freeform it loses the plot
somewhere along the way and forgets what it was trying to say. It looks as if
it makes sense from the guidebooks: three groups of people trying to get hold
of this week’s big bad object, each convinced of their own superiority, only to
find out The Doctor is greater than all of them. But this story takes a weird
route from A to B sometimes. There’s all that stuff about the comet being a
trap, re-appearing in Earth’s orbit every ’25 years’ and starting all sorts of
problems on Earth (except it didn’t: at best it tends to turn up shortly before
things get nasty, like the English Civil War – which despite the presence of
Roundheads and cavaliers started four years after the date of 1638 Lady
Peinforte gives – WWI and WWII. The only date that actually hits is the
assassination of JFK, but that was one lone incident that ended up not changing
much on a global scale, not least because the next two or three presidents till
Nixon knew it was a vote-winner to pledge to carry on Kennedy’s work and even
as a big a ratbag as Tricky Dicky who hated JFK after losing to him in 1960
didn’t dare undo any of it). There’s a
stop-off at Windsor Castle because that’s where the comet fell, which seems
unlikely to say the least and a sub-pot, relegated to the video and DVD extras,
about a trip to the past that resulted in Ace having her portrait painted by
Gainsborough. With so many groups to juggle a lot of this story is spent in
getting one or more of them out the way they don’t find each other and fight
too quickly, which results in such oddities as Lady Peinforte exploring 1988
while her servant gets spooked, The
Nazis discussing philosophy with The Cybermen (why aren’t they shooting at each
other?!) and The Doctor and Ace taking
time out to groove along with Courtney Pine. It’s oddly paced this story,
slowing down where it feels it ought to speed up and with only three episodes
to play with runs out of time to tell the main story, despite all the extras
that feel superfluous to the actual story.
It’s also a story we’ve
had before. Lots. The bow and arrow with amazing powers the whole universe
would like to get their hands on is just the latest macguffin to replace ‘The
Time Destructor’ (‘The Dalek’s
Masterplan’), ‘The Tomb Of Rassilon’ (‘The
Five Doctors’, although for once that trap wasn’t The Doctor’s) and ‘The
Hand Of Omega’ (‘Remembrance Of the
Daleks’. Given that this last one was, ooh, all of two stories and a month
ago every fan still watching noticed that one and given that the plot in
‘Nemesis’ is hazier, crazier and lazier most fans dismissed it as a poor
sequel. For me, though, ‘Silver Nemesis’ is a closer cousin of ‘Battlefield’, a similar story full of
people from the past lost in the present day, a scheming Doctor who turns out
to have a reputation beyond the series and some really great ideas that somehow
runs out of time to tell the great story that’s in there. Oh and The
Brigadier’s there! (Though it’s blink
and you miss it cameo for Nicholas Courtney who turned up for a day out in
Arundel Castle, Sussex, filling in for Windsor Castle as he lived nearby and it
was a sort of unofficial ‘I’m leaving anyday now, honest’ wrap party for JNT.
Who in the end will stay another year plus. Nick’s wearing a beret in the
tourist scenes as it was feared fans might expect a Brig return and be
disappointed – certainly The Brigadier fighting Nazi hordes is a much better
story than the one we got, here or in ‘Battlefield’. Other members of the crowd
include cameos for Clarke, past show directors Peter Moffat, Fiona Cumming and
Andrew Morgan, past writer Graeme Curry, JNT’s pa Kathleen Bidmead and Blake’s
7 producer Vere Lorrimer, who knew so much about the castle and looked so
vaguely knowledgeable he got a few lines as the tour guide. The master himself
Anthony Ainley and writer Stephen Wyatt had planned to come too but heavy rain
delayed them. Clarke, attending location filming to check on his story, is also
the tourist who gives a comedy double-take when Lady Peinforte and Richard walk
past). You’d never call either story the best of the McCoy era, yet the same
things apply as to that story: you can tell that this is a lesser story made by
a better production in a series that it’s in a much better place than it used
to be. When things go wrong in ‘Silver Nemesis’ they go wrong because there are
too many ideas, not too few. There’s an ambition about this story that reaches
for the sky like all other stories in Who’s final two years, even if in this
case it falls a bit flat. Most of all there’s a love and enthusiasm for this
series that nearly pulls everything together. In short, like Lady Peinforte’s gold-tipped
arrows (gold-tipped incidentally? Gold’s a soft metal, wouldn’t it fall apart?
Although given the music motif I’m surprised it’s not a Murray Gold tipped
arrow to sing everyone to death emotively) it’s aim is right even when it
misses it’s target.
Let’s talk about some of the
things ‘Silver Nemesis’ gets right: after 25 years of hinting and using other
monsters as metaphors Dr Who finally puts the Nazis in the show (well,
‘paramilitaries from the 1940s with German accents’ as a nervous producer hastily
renamed them just in case anyone’s upset, but we all know what they are – they
even get Anton Diffring to play the head one who was always playing Nazis in
films). In any other period this would have been a stupid move and I can
already hear the letters of protest at Tom Baker making jokes and offering
Nazis jelly babies or Colin Baker pontificating morals at them. But this is the
7th Dr, the one Doctor ‘dark’ enough to face such a threat head on, while Ace –
as a brunette wildchild rebelling against a life of forced motherhood and who
would and often tries to give her life for the name of freedom, equality and
justice – is the perfect companion to fight back. Both are excellent despite
having less rehearsal time than usual, McCoy really digging deep into his
darker Doctor by now, going for mean, moody and sinister, a Doctor whose seen
the darker forces of nature and isn’t afraid of unleashing them straight back
to those who deserve it. Diffring might have thought the script was stupid (it
didn’t help that Cartmel sent him a copy of ‘Dragonfire’
of all stories, when he asked for some background of what Dr Who was) but it’s
better written than most WWII stories. The Nazis aren’t just your generic
baddies: they’re racists with mystical overtones, who really are delusional
enough to believe in a promised future when they get to have absolute power
over everyone. Better yet the Nazis are shown to be weak simple morally corrupt
wannabe cry-babies against the might of the Cybermen, the ‘super men’ they
worship but who have no more use for kow-towing obsequious right wingers than
they do all other weedy and puny Humans. Cybermen don’t do politics but, like
many a monster, the right automatically think they must be one of ‘them’
because they’re ruthless, opportunistic and heartless, heavy on the trigger
finger. What they miss is that Cybermen are survivors through and through,
victims turned warmongers who became tough through hardship not ideology. I
still can’t quite believe they got Courtney Pine to do a cameo; the only shame
is that he isn’t in the show more but they genuinely didn’t seem to think he’d
show up – actually Courtney was as big a Dr Who fan as any guest who’s been on
the show and more than happy to play (especially when Clarke sent a nice letter
asking for him specially). The quartet only play snatches of three songs (‘Pe
Pi Po’ ‘Adrian’s Affair’ and ‘Frank’s Quest’, the latter used by Ace to jam the
Cyber-signals) and all are pre-recorded
and mimed sadly (though specially done for Dr who: by coincidence they ended up
being recorded in Lime Grove, with the TV studios where Dr who once started now
turned into a soundstage for recordings like this) but they make an impact and
are clearly having the time of their lives. If I had to name my favourite plot
conclusion to any Dr Who story then it might well be the idea of random jazz
signals played through Ace’s ghetto-blaster (cobbled together by The Doctor out
of odds and ends in the Tardis, combining bits and pieces from different eras -
there’s even a 1930s radio antenna on there) while the pair just sit on the
grass quietly grooving. What other
series would even think of that? For ideas alone ‘Silver Nemesis’ is so much
better than the bad old days of ‘Trial Of A Timelord’ and ‘Time and The Rani’ when everyone is vamping,
looking around for inspiration that doesn’t quite come.
It’s just that, even with
missing scenes added to the video (frustratingly they’re absent from the DVD) the
plot still doesn’t make sense and relies on faith from the viewer that things
happen just because they do. Like ‘Battlefield’ there’s an ancient artefact
that everyone’s trying to get hold of that apparently the Doctor dealt with in Britain’s
ancient past, only he stuck it way up in the sky this time instead of burying
it underground (Why? Seriously, all those adventures and he’s only just got
round to doing something about it?) It’s a device that the Nazis equate to the ‘spear
of destiny’, a true Nazi legend that would bring about the Third Reich one day
(yet nobody refers it to it as this and it doesn’t look like a spear. Why not
make it a spear and have done with it? The Nazis clearly didn’t get their myth
from this actual object so where did they get it from? And why has Dr Who still
not done a story about the ‘bell’ shaped UFO Nazis believed would be their
saviour, which is crying out to be a Dr Who story?) Why is the Validium
important? Dunno really, it just is. Isn’t that just like the Halley’s comet
plot of ‘Attack Of The Cybermen’ via ‘The Tenth Planet’? Why yes it is (what
is it about Cybermen and plots involving elliptical orbits? And how weird is it
that a writer should look to Dr Who’s most recycled script for ideas?) Oh and
the metal in the comet turns sentient, looking just like Lady Peinforte when
she merges with it (what the?!) The Cybermen hear about it (how?) and travel in
time (how?) to try and get it, even though it’s a very un-Cyber thing to do
want to do (they want to convert Humans to add to their numbers rather than
have power for power’s sake). I’m guessing this plot strand was left over from
the day when it was about The Daleks. Oh and by the way to do all this and get
hold of the comet-bow thing The Doctor has to be a contemporary of Rassilon:
the hated ‘Timeless Child’ arc might explain that away now, but at the time it
left everyone scratching their heads, because we know he isn’t.
It’s not just the Doctor’s
timeline this story doesn’t quite fit into either. Poor David Banks, who not
only does his typically ‘excellent’ job as Cyber-leader but was so passionate
for them he’d just finished writing the book ‘Cybermen’ about them, having to
read out a script by someone who’d clearly never heard of them a month before
and doesn’t understand them at all. While this is the only story that ever has
them time travel. If indeed that’s what they do. Although the only other
alternative is to have them come from a ‘second Mondas’. Which seems even less
likely). Lady Peinforte and Richard are played with gusto by Fiona Walker (she
always had a soft spot for Dr Who after it gave her her TV break in ‘The Keys Of Marinus’ and had always wanted to come
back, but was so busy it took twenty-four years, a record for Who at the time!)
and Gerad Murphy, but they’re peculiar characters all round. They feel more
like pre-history characters than the ones from Camelot in ‘Battlefield’ and are
at least a century out of date for the darker, harsher, more realistic feel of
the 17th century (think Cromwell and warts. Or indeed ‘The Awakening’ which covers the period
far better despite being a ‘re-enactment’. Well, sort of). Their one plot
function really is to show much the world has changed in 350 odd years and how
humanity is always free-flowing like jazz, without a Cyber-style plan, but they
even mess this up (a cut scene had Peinforte appalled that her nice house is
now a pub full of half-dressed people, but this got changed when it became
clear a night-shoot would be too expensive, so it became a café instead).
What’s more the Lady uses
magic – not science from an alien culture in the far future that looks like
magic, but real magic. The idea that you can time travel using some special
words, blood and a chicken (!) is so far
out of kilter with everything else we’ve ever had in Dr Who that you’re left
waiting for a denouement where we find out what really happened, but no:
apparently that’s all you need for time travel (it’s undone somewhat by ‘The Curse Of Fenric’ saying it was his doing,
but what’s odder than it happening is that The Doctor’s not even curious). Just
compare this back to back with ‘The
Daemons’ where he absolutely categorically says that magic does not exist;
here The Doctor’s not even curious about it. Come to that you spend the entire
story expecting to see the Cybermen massacre the Nazis and we never get that
scene either, just Ace running away from both sets up some stairs (poor Sophie
Aldred: she was terrified of heights but, game for anything, was just about
okay when a 20 foot gantry and lots of rehearsal time was suggested; in the end
a change of venues to the dingiest emptiest warehouse you’ve ever seen, with
gantries put together an hour earlier by BBC propmen, meant she was 50 foot
above the ground on the last day of filming with no rehearsal that she just had
to get right or else. Actually a disused gasworks, it’s now the site of the Millennium
Dome, so not the last disappointing event to be themed round an anniversary on
that spot). As a three-parter, too, it feels as if everyone gets short-changed:
Peinforte and Richard are barely sketched in, there’s barely any Cybermen
action (and even when there is they get defeated by a teen from Perivale and a
slingshot – not the most noble defeat in their long history.
Cybermen were also built for
striding down corridors in black and white, not long shots walking across muddy
fields in colour) and The Nazis are the quietest most well-behaved bunch of
Nazis you ever saw, content to let De Flores be their mouthpiece even though
he’s clearly mad even for a Nazi. It’s a real waste of the talents of Leslie French, then eighty-four and on Verity
Lambert’s list of 1st Doctors if William Hartnell said no, to get a
few short lines as the mathematician killed at the start of the story. The
battle sequences are some of the poorest in the show’s history: how did a punch-up
between Nazis and Cybermen ever end up looking like that, people in long shot
vaguely looking at each other with a the odd mild explosion? Why are the Nazis
wasted too – you only need to look at ‘Remembrance’ to see how well the theme
might have been used, comparing them to the Cybermen, but it doesn’t happen –
they’re foot soldiers and nothing more. The dialogue is a struggle at times
too: Clarke goes to the struggle of giving everyone very different styles, even
the trouble of writing Lady Peinforte and Richard’s dialogue in iambic
pentameter (even though it’s the wrong century) but he’s hardly David Whittaker
and it just sounds like people speaking gibberish in a different way to the
gibberish the monotonous Cybermen and the flowery, delusional Nazis speak. Only
Ace speaks ‘normally’, thanks to her creator Ian Briggs adding some dialogue of
his own (there’s an injoke where Richard, overawed, prays for his sins and
promises to ‘send Briggs his money’) – and when a sixteen year old girl who
swears as poshly as she does is the most ‘normal’ character you know you’ve got
problems. Then there are easily three of the twenty worst scenes in all of Dr
Who. Social workers! Royals! Americans! It’s as if ‘Silver Nemesis’ is designed
to impress all the people at home who have been put off Dr Who and think it’s
silly, by organising a meeting of the biggest baddest bunch of creatures in the
show’s and Earth’s history, then pins a sign in its front going ‘please
exterminate me, I deserve it!’
In the end ‘Silver
Nemesis’ is a collection of really great ideas (and one or two disastrous ones)
rather than a really good story but, again like ‘Battlefield’, it’s a near miss
so close to its target that you can feel what the production team were trying
to do and you spend the story willing them to get a bullseye right up until the
end. And yet the ideas are great: even if they belong in different stories for
the most part there are some really brilliant Dr Whoy ideas here: the jazz, the
metronomic Cybermen and the Nazis wannabes, even the (nearly) Civil War era
witches at loose in the future – there could have been a great trio of stories
there had they been done separately. Even together there’s a parallel universe story
out there (preferably with an extra episode or more) where they all make sense
in the same story. But for whatever reason (my guess; a newbie writer, a tired
cast, a weary crew) ‘Silver Nemesis’ doesn’t make the most of any of the good
things going for it. For all ‘Silver Nemesis’ promotion of jazz as free-form
and timeless, the clock is this story’s real Nemesis: both abstract (the
continuity problems) and physical (this story was made in almighty rush) time
gets in the way. They had twenty-five years to prepare for this story yet they
botch it by rushing at the last minute. Even the music idea, though brilliant,
isn’t quite right (if they wanted freeform style music they should have had The
Doctor hanging out with the Grateful Dead and Jefferson Airplane in Haight
Ashbury being a hippie!)
I suspect any other era
would have been able to cover up the cracks too, but it’s an oddly nervy story
for a series that had been running twenty-five years and so ought to be
confident of what it could do by now, but then these were strange and difficult
times: there isn’t the celebration atmosphere of ‘The Three Doctors’ ‘The Five Doctors’ or even ‘Remembrance Of The Daleks’ (the story
that really should have been the 25th anniversary special. Not least
because it looks as if it was filmed in November, not mid-Summer as here with
characters walking round in T-shirts. Unless the comet has done something
really odd to the weather). The Doctor’s real nemesis is Michael Grade who
seems ready to kill it however well it does and no matter how many good ideas
it has. Nobody believes in this show anymore, especially the people in power,
and that shows: however hard you act tough, like a Nazi or a Silver Giant, life
goes in ups and downs and this is clearly a down, in public perception if not
reality. The Doctor is trying hard to go with the flow, cooling to jazz, but
there are dark clouds on the horizon and – twenty-five years after the first
time the show was nearly cancelled – the vultures are circling again (I blame
the comet). Few stories sum up the lack of confidence more than ‘Silver
Nemesis’, a story that reaches for some big issues, then backs away from them
scared. A story equating Nazis with Cybermen and bad luck that follows the
human race every quarter century, every time they’re just getting their act
together again, is a great idea for Dr Who with lots of philosophical
ramifications to muse on. But you have to make those for yourself as they’re
not in the script at all: we just have three only slightly different lots of
bad guys, fighting the good guy who’s as evil and cruel as he ever gets. This
isn’t one of those stories that was so hopeless it was never going to work –
it’s just one where too much is working against it, from script problems to
production problems to half a cast who clearly don’t want to be there (if
you’re wondering by the way Stefan Edberg beat Boris Becker in a tense four set
final, a day after Steffi Graff beat Martina Navratilova in one of the
topsiest-turviest women’s final matches tennis ever saw. Let’s hope Diffring
felt the sacrifice of appearing was worth it for that because boy does he
glower on screen).
POSITIVES + Even at its
worst and most incomprehensible, even when rushed into filming without a proper
rehearsal and still posing for publicity photos in their lunch-break, seasons
25 and 26 glow because of Sylvester McCoy and Sophie Aldred and the love they
clearly have for one another. Their Dr-companion relationship is truly one of
the best and they seemingly improvise their way round every script, making it
feel natural and warm despite the lumpy way it can sometimes look on page (you
wouldn’t know this was draft 64-ish, they lay it so naturally throughout). You
can tell these two are having a whale of a time together as actors and
characters (they bonded quickly after finding they shared a birthday of August
20th – it’s mighty tight which Doctors are which astrological signs by the way
if you’re interested in such things with three Earth signs (Drs 1,4 and 7) four
Fire signs (all Aries interestingly: 2 5 10/14 and 12), three water signs (3,8,
and 11) and five air signs (6,9, war, 13 and 15); the Doctor himself says he’s
a Sagittarius ‘probably’ - the sign of the carefree traveller – an in-joke as
the series itself has a birthday on November 23rd. Of all Tardis teams,
this is the one that seems the most fun. At least until the 7th Dr goes all
gloomy and dark again.
NEGATIVES - Oh God,
those ‘comedy’ bits! There’s an American millionaire who wanders into the plot
and out again, thinking that Lady Peinforte and Richard are a couple of
eccentric Brits rather than a couple of time travellers from the Middle Ages.
This scene is there, apparently, because producer John Nathan-Turner wanted a
big name American superstar for his overseas cousins and went to the length of
borrowing Kate O’Mara’s contact book and phoning around, but because Dr Who was
so comparatively unknown there, even after a higher profile 1980s, he got
turned down flat by almost everyone. Dolores Grey was a last minute bit of
desperation: she was in London appearing on ‘Follies’ on Broadway and had made
a name for herself in musicals in the 1950s (she’s in the film of ‘Kismet’ and
originated the cowgirl herself in ‘Annie Get Your Gun’ on stage; she’s even won
a Tony award and even John Barrowman doesn’t have one of those, albeit for a
musical no one has ever heard of it because it was cancelled after just six
shows). JNT thought she was funny even
though few Americans knew her at the time and no Brits did, giving her the
lushest poshest treatment the BBC could afford. By all accounts, though, she
was a pain: her limo was so expensive its owner insisted on driving her himself
but was horrified when she treated him like a servant, insisting on having him
carry all her mountain of bags even though she was only needed for a few hours.
She was late because the driver had forgotten to put petrol in the car, then on
arrival she discovered she’d forgotten her wig, causing a mad dash for
something else, then handed notes to the lighting, camera and makeup crews on
how they had to make her look her best. She also changed the script, refusing
to be called ‘Miss Hackensack’ and settling for the ore generic ‘Miss
Remington’. Most fans agree it’s not the best use of budget in the show’s
history and really shouldn’t have made the final edit when so much got cut.
Heck I’d settle for the scene of the duck entering the Tardis (actually a
deliberate ‘fake’ for Noel’s House Party, though McCoy seriously argued to have
it as a companion).
That’s pretty bad, but
cringe anew when the poshest sounding skinheads you ever heard in your life see
two people I medieval grab and declare them to be ‘social workers’ though I
don’t think many social workers wander around in Medieval garb (why not assume
they’re going to a fancy dress party?) They’re then strung upside down from a
tree in their underwear. Yeah, that’s really making Dr Who ‘real’ again and
appealing to the council estate kids there. The worst one though has to be the near
miss with the ‘Queen’ walking her corgis, a look alike so bad I genuinely
didn’t know who she was meant to be until I bought my first Dr Who guide book.
We’re somehow meant to believe that The Doctor, who recognises pretty much
everyone, doesn’t recognise her so that doesn’t help sell who she’s meant to be
either. IT’s not just that it’s done so badly, it’s the fact that if this was
‘real’ Dr Who we know they would have been overthrown as part of a cruel
tyrannical system with the land they horded and the taxes they took at great
expense given back to the masses for free while they themselves get sent to
Shada. But Dr Who’s on too much thin ice as it is, so instead it looks like a
‘tribute’ from people trying to get good marks with the teacher (or at any rate
Michael Grade). Pah! The Queen was a last minute substitution for Prince Edward
who nearly did it, the first time it was ever that way round in the history of
the Royals when he was usually a poor substitute for her. Good job it wasn’t
Prince Andrew is all I’m saying. Though Ace would have soon put him straight
with some Nitro 9 if he’d tried anything on her. Although for once I do have
some sympathy for the Royal Family: they spent the 1987 Royal Variety
performance sitting through a star turn by…Dolores Grey. Ha ha ha who’s
laughing now?!?
BEST QUOTE: Lady Peinforte: ‘This is no
madness. Tis England’.
PREQUELS/SEQUELS: ‘Silver Nemesis’
is the last time we see the Cybermen before their revival in ‘Rise Of The
Cybermen/Age Of Steel’, but
they had a sort of half-life in between the two. After it became
clear the TV Movie would not lead to a new series after all and that the BBC
still weren’t interested in making any new episodes there was a rush by several
different groups to keep the flame alive in as many different ways as possible.
‘Cyberon’ was one of the more interesting revivals, a sort of unofficial augmentation
of the Cybermen from BBV Productions that became an audio book, a video, a
novel, an anthology and a webcast and another ‘halfway house’ towards the Big
Finish production company that uses many of their talents. Given that the
Cybermen were still sort of copyright the BBC and definitely the copyright of
writers Gerry Davis and Kit Pedler a few changes had to be made to them. The Cyberon
are slightly different to the Cybermen in that, while they’re still human
beings augmented by cyber-technology, they’re controlled by a silver-coloured
liquid drug that converts people from the inside and connects them to a single
hive mind (like the Borg, or indeed the Cybermen of the future in ‘Nightmare In Silver’).
They now wear white tunics and have three fingers on each hand, though happily
they keep their metal handlebars and accordion chests and (less happily) their
deadly allergy to gold. Nicholas Briggs’ ‘Cyber Hunt’ (1998) started the ball
rolling on audio, a spin off of the excellent fan made ‘Audio Visual
Adventures’ that had Briggs himself as the 9th-Doctor-in-all-but-name
(though frustratingly it’s not on archive.org website with the other Audio
Visuals) accompanied by journalist Olivia as a Cyberwar spreads over the
universe and towards Earth. ‘Cybergeddon’ (2000) features a part-robotic
starship captain and his pet robot (a little like ‘The Pirate Planet’)
desperately trying to fight off a Cyber invasion from space. Lance Parkin then
wrote the direct-to-video story simply titled ‘Cyberon’ (2001), a logical
extension of the series that made the most of the ‘monologue’ style low-budget no-frills
style by being a prequel, following a Cyberon during the conversion phase as a
Doctor (no, not that Doctor) offers it as an alternative to death (which is not
unlike a low budget ‘World
Enough and Time’). I don’t think its giving much away to
say that the Cyberon slowly loses all trace of the patient’s personality and instead starts having ideas
of its own about world domination! The series was then left dormant until 2020
when it was unexpectedly revived again, with Parkin adapting the video in prose
form as part of an anthology alongside short stories by other writers (again
simply titled ‘Cyberon’). This story was promoted by way of a forty-second
webcast ‘Cyberon Is Back!!!’ which resembled ‘Death Comes To Time’ ‘Real Time’
and the 8th Doctor ‘Shada’ as a sort of audio adventure-with-pictures.
The two audio adventures were then novelised with a second webcast ‘More Than
Human’ and an audio anthology of the three. While none of these appearances were
official the ‘Cyberons’ did appear alongside The Cybermen in the 1988 Dr Who Annual
(a fan fundraiser to fill the gap on bookshelves that in reality came out in
2022!) All are worth reading/hearing/seeing and fill in a hole of what the
Cyberman might have looked like post ‘Silver Nemesis’ if Dr Who had been around
in the 1990s (they’re very heavily influenced by Star Trek: Next Generation and
The Borg) and are readily available right now, though equally none are
un-missable either if you’re reading this in the far future and struggling to
get hold of a copy of any of them.
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